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Day after day I sit, poised deep in thought and contemplation while tourists stop and stare at me with eyes of admiration Sometimes they seem hypnotized, looking without blinking I wonder what they would think if they knew what I was thinking I wish Rodin hadn't sculpted me wearing this scowl of a frown I'd wink and smile back at them if I could put my right hand down I've seen children hide their eyes when they realize I am nude Rodin was the sculptor, so don't go blaming me. Don't be rude! I don't mind being in the buff. Who needs to wear proper attire? There's a lady who visits me on weekends, eyes filled with desire. I was originally called 'The Poet.' Maybe you didn't know that. But the museum guides never mention that in their chitchat "And here, ladies and gentleman, the most famous Rodin of all. Six and a half feet tall, having a place of honor in the gallery hall." And if I'd been standing, my height would've reached twelve feet My butt is really getting sore from seating on this pedestal seat The gift shop sells replicas of me. I've been reduced to pint-size and after one hundred, thirty-seven years, I've started to oxidize Great. Here comes another tribe of school kids, all chewing gum I guess they'll wad it up and giggle when they stick it on my bum. So goes the inescapable days and nights of a sculpted work of art I have the capability to feel because Rodin chiseled in me a heart 8/19/17

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Date: 9/17/2017 9:38:00 PM
Missed this one Lin, belated congrats on POTD, was a very enlightening read!
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Date: 9/8/2017 1:21:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/7/2017 8:32:00 AM
VERY creative, Lin--Congrats on your win! Janice
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Date: 9/6/2017 9:47:00 PM
Wonderful, Lin - congrats!
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Date: 9/7/2017 7:52:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 9/6/2017 9:42:00 PM
Congratulations, Lin, on your win with this write, beautiful.
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Date: 9/7/2017 7:52:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 9/1/2017 11:13:00 PM
I would much rather call this famous statue The Poet! I think they should let everyone know that. You gave this sculpture character and heart Lin. I loved it! Congratulations on having it honored with POTD!
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Date: 9/1/2017 11:16:00 PM
It does seem more appropriate. Thanks so very much for the grand comments, Connie.
Date: 9/1/2017 7:41:00 AM
I loved how you wrote this. I enjoyed every line of this poem. Great. Tfs!
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Date: 9/1/2017 11:15:00 PM
Thanks very much, Lei.
Date: 8/22/2017 2:11:00 PM
Excellent personification poem, Lin. Funny and factual ... a sweet combo of poetic artwork. Mighty fine poetry. Love and peace
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Date: 8/22/2017 2:29:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 8/21/2017 11:46:00 PM
Really great, Lin.
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Date: 8/22/2017 2:29:00 PM
Thank you very much, Carole.
Date: 8/21/2017 9:15:00 AM
I missed this one earlier Lin. I really enjoyed this. It never occurred to me how a statue might feel, just hanging out like that every day. Great work. And POTD two days in a row? Congratulations! -- Dean
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Date: 8/21/2017 9:36:00 AM
Some of them are so life like that they can be perceived as real. From your comment I can see you're thinking about it now. lol Thanks for the great comments and congratulations, Dean.
Date: 8/20/2017 10:18:00 AM
Great personification, congratulations on your POTD, Lin:)
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Date: 8/20/2017 10:33:00 AM
Much obliged to you for your thoughtful comments, Jo.
Date: 8/20/2017 7:53:00 AM
I loved how you did this, and the poem flows so well, the word roll of the tongue, the photo is also so cute and goes so well with this gem of a poem! At first glance I thought the Statue was of me!!!!
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Date: 8/20/2017 8:20:00 AM
First, I'll thank you for liking the poem. Secondly, send me a picture.
Date: 8/20/2017 7:53:00 AM
I forgot to mention, yes I came back to read this again!! :)
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Date: 8/20/2017 8:20:00 AM
How could I forget?
Date: 8/20/2017 7:19:00 AM
Late Congrats!!! on POTD...great statues think alike lol...a very pensive write Lin...best wishes...^WW^
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Date: 8/20/2017 7:23:00 AM
Thanks, Warrior guy...lol
Date: 8/20/2017 5:30:00 AM
This is very well done. I enjoyed it emensley. You are a brilliantly gifted writer. A poet indeed. Well done Lin.
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Date: 8/20/2017 6:04:00 AM
Hi, Klio. Your compliments are always so kind, so I thank you.
Date: 8/20/2017 4:28:00 AM
Hi Lin , beautiful description of Rodin and how you mastered him thinking within the statue , very enjoyable read my friend ::))) hugs
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Date: 8/20/2017 6:04:00 AM
Thanks very much, Niall. Glad you enjoyed the read. ;-)
Date: 8/19/2017 8:03:00 PM
This is REALLY clever, Lin. I guess I am missing the point of this contest though. I thought I had to describe myself as my own piece of artwork but I am seeing all these really good ones people are doing relating themselves to true art. I think I gotta go read his instructions again!!
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Date: 8/20/2017 6:03:00 AM
Thanks for liking it, Andrea. I think the instructions said we could personify any artwork: painting or statue.
Date: 8/19/2017 7:02:00 PM
Wow! This is really amazing. I haven't been on the soup real long but of all the poems of the day I've read so far this is my favorite and now a fav!!! RPAT
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Date: 8/19/2017 7:27:00 PM
That's so wonderful to know, roger, and I thank you for your thoughtfulness and for faving this one. Welcome to the site.
Date: 8/19/2017 6:52:00 PM
Hi Lin, congrats on POTD honors! Your poem is imaginative and inviting. Each line hooks you right into the next with keen interest. The title is wonderful, the poem is a pure joy to read and the last line awesome 'Rodin chiseled in me a heart.' Just beautiful:)
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Date: 8/19/2017 7:26:00 PM
Hi Susan, and I really appreciate your detailed remarks so thank you most kindly.
Date: 8/19/2017 6:20:00 PM
lol Lin this is fab.... congratulations....Seren
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Date: 8/19/2017 6:31:00 PM
Hiya, Seren.. Thanks very much.
Date: 8/19/2017 5:21:00 PM
Congrats, Was FUN from start to finish!!!!
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Date: 8/19/2017 5:23:00 PM
well thank you, Donna. That a great remark!
Date: 8/19/2017 4:33:00 PM
Very enjoyable read Lin congratulations on POTD
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Date: 8/19/2017 5:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, Edward.
Date: 8/19/2017 2:21:00 PM
WOW Lin two in row, yey! A huge congrats for this magnificent POTD! :)
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Date: 8/19/2017 2:24:00 PM
Thank you, Akkina. There were unusual circumstances, but all is well.
Date: 8/19/2017 2:11:00 PM
Love the ending Lin...Congrats on POTD
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Date: 8/19/2017 2:23:00 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 8/19/2017 1:06:00 PM
Hi Lin, congratulations on POTD honours. It is much deserved with this wonderful piece. I wish you well in the contest. This a a wonderful way to write this contest piece. It is a wonderful use of personification. Nice to see a poem that deserves to be POTD. An excellent write. This is a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/19/2017 1:15:00 PM
I'm thankful to have many loyal friends like you, Mike. I appreciate you for many things.
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