Notes About The Poem

Thoughts of 'The Poet'

Day after day I sit, poised deep in thought and contemplation
while tourists stop and stare at me with eyes of admiration
Sometimes they seem hypnotized, looking without blinking
I wonder what they would think if they knew what I was thinking
I wish Rodin hadn't sculpted me wearing this scowl of a frown
I'd wink and smile back at them if I could put my right hand down
I've seen children hide their eyes when they realize I am nude
Rodin was the sculptor, so don't go blaming me. Don't be rude!
I don't mind being in the buff. Who needs to wear proper attire?
There's a lady who visits me on weekends, eyes filled with desire.
I was originally called 'The Poet.' Maybe you didn't know that.
But the museum guides never mention that in their chitchat 

"And here, ladies and gentleman, the most famous Rodin of all.
Six and a half feet tall, having a place of honor in the gallery hall."

And if I'd been standing, my height would've reached twelve feet
My butt is really getting sore from seating on this pedestal seat
The gift shop sells replicas of me. I've been reduced to pint-size
and after one hundred, thirty-seven years, I've started to oxidize
Great. Here comes another tribe of school kids, all chewing gum
I guess they'll wad it up and giggle when they stick it on my bum.
So goes the inescapable days and nights of a sculpted work of art
I have the capability to feel because Rodin chiseled in me a heart


8/19/17
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Hamilton Avatar
September 17, 2017 at 9:38 PM
Missed this one Lin, belated congrats on POTD, was a very enlightening read!
Allison Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 1:21 PM
dropping back with my congrats Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 8:32 AM
VERY creative, Lin--Congrats on your win! Janice
Barden Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 9:47 PM
Wonderful, Lin - congrats!
Lane Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 7:52 AM
Thank you
Raynes Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 9:42 PM
Congratulations, Lin, on your win with this write, beautiful.
Lane Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 7:52 AM
Thank you
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 11:13 PM
I would much rather call this famous statue The Poet! I think they should let everyone know that. You gave this sculpture character and heart Lin. I loved it! Congratulations on having it honored with POTD!
Lane Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 11:16 PM
It does seem more appropriate. Thanks so very much for the grand comments, Connie.
Strauss Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 7:41 AM
I loved how you wrote this. I enjoyed every line of this poem. Great. Tfs!
Lane Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 11:15 PM
Thanks very much, Lei.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 2:11 PM
Excellent personification poem, Lin. Funny and factual ... a sweet combo of poetic artwork. Mighty fine poetry. Love and peace
Lane Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Thank you.
Duet Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 11:46 PM
Really great, Lin.
Lane Avatar
August 22, 2017 at 2:29 PM
Thank you very much, Carole.
Wood Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 9:15 AM
I missed this one earlier Lin. I really enjoyed this. It never occurred to me how a statue might feel, just hanging out like that every day. Great work. And POTD two days in a row? Congratulations! -- Dean
Lane Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 9:36 AM
Some of them are so life like that they can be perceived as real. From your comment I can see you're thinking about it now. lol Thanks for the great comments and congratulations, Dean.
Daniel Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 10:18 AM
Great personification, congratulations on your POTD, Lin:)
Lane Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 10:33 AM
Much obliged to you for your thoughtful comments, Jo.
Warrior Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:19 AM
Late Congrats!!! on POTD...great statues think alike lol...a very pensive write Lin...best wishes...^WW^
Lane Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:23 AM
Thanks, Warrior guy...lol
Tsitsikroni Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 5:30 AM
This is very well done. I enjoyed it emensley. You are a brilliantly gifted writer. A poet indeed. Well done Lin.
Lane Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 6:04 AM
Hi, Klio. Your compliments are always so kind, so I thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 8:03 PM
This is REALLY clever, Lin. I guess I am missing the point of this contest though. I thought I had to describe myself as my own piece of artwork but I am seeing all these really good ones people are doing relating themselves to true art. I think I gotta go read his instructions again!!
Lane Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 6:03 AM
Thanks for liking it, Andrea. I think the instructions said we could personify any artwork: painting or statue.
Adams Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 7:02 PM
Wow! This is really amazing. I haven't been on the soup real long but of all the poems of the day I've read so far this is my favorite and now a fav!!! RPAT
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 7:27 PM
That's so wonderful to know, roger, and I thank you for your thoughtfulness and for faving this one. Welcome to the site.
Ashley Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 6:52 PM
Hi Lin, congrats on POTD honors! Your poem is imaginative and inviting. Each line hooks you right into the next with keen interest. The title is wonderful, the poem is a pure joy to read and the last line awesome 'Rodin chiseled in me a heart.' Just beautiful:)
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 7:26 PM
Hi Susan, and I really appreciate your detailed remarks so thank you most kindly.
Roberts Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 6:20 PM
lol Lin this is fab.... congratulations....Seren
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 6:31 PM
Hiya, Seren.. Thanks very much.
Roberts Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 5:21 PM
Congrats, Was FUN from start to finish!!!!
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 5:23 PM
well thank you, Donna. That a great remark!
Mccall Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 4:33 PM
Very enjoyable read Lin congratulations on POTD
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 5:21 PM
Thank you very much, Edward.
Downing  Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 2:21 PM
WOW Lin two in row, yey! A huge congrats for this magnificent POTD! :)
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 2:24 PM
Thank you, Akkina. There were unusual circumstances, but all is well.
May Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 2:11 PM
Love the ending Lin...Congrats on POTD
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 2:23 PM
Thank you very much, Joseph. I appreciate your comments.
Raven Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 1:06 PM
Hi Lin, congratulations on POTD honours. It is much deserved with this wonderful piece. I wish you well in the contest. This a a wonderful way to write this contest piece. It is a wonderful use of personification. Nice to see a poem that deserves to be POTD. An excellent write. This is a fave. Hugs....Mike. XX
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 1:15 PM
I'm thankful to have many loyal friends like you, Mike. I appreciate you for many things.
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations MS. Lin for true POTD honors...
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 12:22 PM
Oh my dear, Charlie. You are such a welcome sight and I love your comment. Hugs, dear man.
Y. Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 11:47 AM
Hi Lin, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on getting the poem of day. It was most definitely well deserved:-) Alexis
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 11:52 AM
Thank you very much, Alexis. ;-)
Horn Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 11:45 AM
Did you know that Rodin was originally Polish and his name was Rodininski. He moved to Hungry and changed it to end in sky. When he wanted to wrote a poem to me; did it while downhill he would ski. Wore his cell phone around his neck.
Lane Avatar
August 19, 2017 at 11:48 AM
I was not aware, James.
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