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Thoughts From a Turtle

Time for me is measured not in minutes or days, but distance I claim nothing more than the shell where I sleep Nor do I seek power, or have forethought, as I am only here to move on, to fill a void, to be part of the cycle of life, obtaining nothing To procreate and eat enough to sustain life, my only desire This too is just done, never planned I ask nothing from the world, but enough distance to cover in a lifetime To be invisible to all but my needs To be at peace Isn't that enough? 7/19/14 contest Free Verse..Theme.. Turtles

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Date: 8/7/2014 11:31:00 PM
Of all the HM's I am seeing, yours is the one that I think most deserved to be on the main list! Anyway, congrats on the HM you share with me!!hahaha
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Frederic Parker
Date: 8/8/2014 5:23:00 PM
Thank you my friend, I'll keep my turtle thoughts in a shell on this one..and slowly move on..by the way take a look at the 6 month list I'm slowly catching up
Date: 7/27/2014 5:22:00 PM
wow I really admire your approach to the theme in your poem here. VERY nice. I love it!!
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Date: 7/19/2014 1:59:00 PM
Exquisite work Frederic ! This lovely gem keeps mesmerising thru' out,, luck in contest my dear friend!
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Date: 7/19/2014 1:09:00 PM
One of your best! The ending is wonderful. BG
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Date: 7/19/2014 10:54:00 AM
This is really a lovely little piece, with a beautiful message I can relate to. It should be enough to live this life in harmony and peace with the world and with ones fellow human beings.
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