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Watching Time Stand Still

Oh, time quick slips away, the sublime and the gay. Each click of life's dark clock, each brick and heavy rock. I build a fortress wall, so filled with thoughts that fall. Some should and wished I'd done, some would- or just begun. ________________________ June 30, 2020 Poetry/Verse/Thoughts Copyright Protected, ID 20-1264-181-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest Verses In Essence sponsor, Joseph May Third Place

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/16/2020 1:46:00 PM

I love how your muse is centered around framing thoughts tangled with time Constance. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :)

Constance La France
Date: 7/17/2020 1:01:00 PM

Aditi, thanks for the nice comment and congratulations _Constance

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/12/2020 4:16:00 AM

I love the flow for it resonates beautifully, Constance, my compliments for your efforts, and your placement, blessings! -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William

Constance La France
Date: 7/12/2020 11:38:00 AM

William, thanks so much for the nice compliment on my poem, it means a lot to me _Constance

Joseph May

Date: 7/11/2020 5:22:00 PM

Very nicely penned Constance, Congrats on your win

Constance La France
Date: 7/12/2020 11:39:00 AM

Joseph, thanks for the compliment, the inspiration and the congrats _Constance

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/11/2020 2:05:00 PM

such profound poetry. Love this, Constance. Congrats for your win.

Constance La France
Date: 7/11/2020 2:43:00 PM

Andrea, thanks for the compliment and the congrats _Constance

Sand Blown

Date: 7/2/2020 11:10:00 PM

...yessir...thoughts....slip away...it's not fun when you're working on something.... stan sand

Constance La France
Date: 7/10/2020 12:48:00 PM

Stan, thanks for visiting and the comment, yes time is a funny thing, goes so fast when you are late for the bus but so slow when you are waiting for the water to boil for a cup of tea _Constance

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/2/2020 5:19:00 PM

bricks and heavy rocks....are things that are overstocked....but just think if we use our minds....retribution would be so easy to find....but, instead, we act out on impulse....and through it all, too many get engulfed....very insightful adh....;)

Constance La France
Date: 7/10/2020 12:50:00 PM

Eric, thanks for visiting, yes sometimes I overthink things end up digging myself into a big whole of nothing _Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/2/2020 1:43:00 PM

Lovely poem and impeccable accompaniment! Love!

Constance La France
Date: 7/10/2020 12:50:00 PM

Kim, thanks so much for visiting with the lovely _Constance

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 7/1/2020 4:04:00 PM

Love this D.H Dark matter is the counting clock Heavy is the rock it is built on And the black hole Is everything the last verses encapsulates

Constance La France
Date: 7/10/2020 12:51:00 PM

Christopher, thanks for visiting and for the comment _Constance