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Thoughtless Wind

Ruthless is the wind It trifles without care That hearts have grown so fond Of the maple's scarlet flair~ For with the morning's dew No leaf was to be spared Each scarlet leaf has spun away Not left to bask beneath the sun No color left to stifle breaths In autumn's brilliant dawn~
--------------------------------- Resubmitted for Brian Strand's Contest: #229

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/21/2011 2:43:00 PM
A beautiful piece on autumn.. Congrats Carrie on your wonderful win in this contest.love, gautami
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:55:00 PM
always a winner for me, carrie.. and heres; another one worth a great spot in brian's contest.. congrats! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:37:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your excellent win in Brian's contest with this breathtaking poetry.. enjoy another wonderful top ten sweet success ..my friend..luv..
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Date: 6/20/2011 4:07:00 PM
How sad it is when that last colorful leaf is gone, Carrie. A breathtaking poem. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/23/2010 11:38:00 AM
Carrie, I absolutely loved this!! So it totally broke my heart when I counted the words and it had 30 :(--sorry i was too technical but just wanted to let you know that this was an awesome write, so bravo to you for this beauty! :) hugs-- nikko :) sending you soupmail after...
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Date: 9/12/2010 7:36:00 AM
Hi Carrie, I love your entry for Nikko's contest. Sometimes that wind can be so thoughtless. A lovely read, best wishes in the contest ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 9/11/2010 6:24:00 PM
Life is vanity this poem cries, and the preacher of wisdom heard and said that's my idea, but the muse say no longer ... it claims a new master. Congrats
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Date: 9/11/2010 5:33:00 PM
Well expressed thoughts on Thoughtless wind
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Date: 9/11/2010 5:14:00 PM
Very nice Carrie! I've been thinking about how seldom we have a fall anymore with color because of the wind. Captured in few words!
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Date: 9/11/2010 12:55:00 PM
nice entry for the contest, good luck, enjoyed..P.D.
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Date: 9/11/2010 12:40:00 PM
Thanks for you comment on my blog. I think this poem is just magical, best of luck in the contest.. love constance
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Date: 9/11/2010 12:03:00 PM
beautiful poem, good luck in the contest
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