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Thought To Order Nature

I thought to order Nature, yet it rained that picnic day: apparently her sun, did not listen, had she even bothered to ask, my wonder? I thought to order Nature -- in retrospect, a Saturday blunder. I thought to order Nature -- fondest of autumn now my late fall -- bright patterns, so enlivening! Speckled flora, like my own somewhat disheartening, though fitting -- my parlor, much paler could pop with fresh color~ Oh, to order Nature, would give my last Dollar! So, Nature could not be ordered though her seasons vary in length not fixed like Tablet Stone~ never try to order nature: Her only sure clear -- clearly has a mind all her own!

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Date: 3/25/2025 4:48:00 AM
We don't have any control over Nature. So, nature cannot be ordered. It has a mind and entity of its own. So unanticipated things happen. It may rain on a picnic day though we wish to have a pleasant and sunny day. Right observation.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/25/2025 6:22:00 PM
Sort of controls us, in a way. Thank you, Valsa.
Date: 3/25/2025 3:45:00 AM
You cannot change nature. The world seems to be moving on its axis, according to NASA.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/25/2025 6:24:00 PM
Yes, I hear that earth axis is reorienting itself in space. Normal? Happens from time to time?
Date: 3/24/2025 11:22:00 PM
Great metaphor on nature being ordered. You are gonna get terrible postal service.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/25/2025 6:26:00 PM
Yea, what a joke. A letter takes weeks to get where its suppose to get. Was better when we had biplanes.
Date: 3/24/2025 8:24:00 PM
Ha! Nature has a mind of her own. That's for sure. Smiles, Gershon
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/25/2025 6:27:00 PM
Yep. Nature. My wife. My cats.
Date: 3/23/2025 11:16:00 AM
Hello Joe DiMino, yes mother nature has a mind of her own. Enjoy yoyur day my friend. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/25/2025 10:48:00 AM
Hello Joe DiMino, Oh! Well she had a great idea. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/23/2025 12:39:00 PM
Inspired by my wife:) Thank you, Darlene; have a beautiful weekend.
Date: 3/23/2025 9:58:00 AM
Give your last dollar.?? You must think paper Comes on trees Joe Dimino.? I am sure There is some 'new wave' teaching to Claim otherwise though?..Lol))
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/23/2025 12:42:00 PM
Yep...a Tsunami of New Age. Thank you, my friend. Have blessed weekend.
Date: 3/23/2025 8:27:00 AM
- No, we can't order nature... we can only borrow it and enjoy it, Joe :) - Happy Sunday :) - hugs
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Joe Dimino
Date: 3/23/2025 3:50:00 PM
Yep, Nature is the boss:))

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