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Thought Changer

Catching sight of unwanted reflection through my eyes I observe my murky mind lifeless, inactive, defying action just a blank canvas, raw, pure, unrefined, desire to inject substantial color inspired pastels to brighten the darkness eyes opaque though restrict light, much duller impulses, brain requesting less Starkness, my poor mind is without shape or structure until my thoughts turn to the one I love blissful images, colorful picture changing this abyss, no more mourning dove, she changes my thinking without restraints such beautiful colors my mind she paints.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/13/2018 9:37:00 AM

Lovely poem, Roy. Congrats on your POTD. Beautifully done.

Roy Pett
Date: 3/13/2018 11:23:00 AM

Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Line, your support is really appreciated. :))

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/13/2018 2:08:00 AM

This is a wonderfully romantic way to describe the love that colors your life Roy. This is going into my Faves! Congratulations on your well deserved POTD! : )

Roy Pett
Date: 3/13/2018 3:59:00 AM

Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Connie, I feel honoured that you think this is worthy of being placed in your faves, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/10/2018 7:33:00 AM

Congrats on POTD! A lovely love sonnet! How true that love incites the colors of our mind!

Roy Pett
Date: 3/10/2018 8:14:00 AM

Thank you for your congratulations Kim much appreciated. :))

Eve Roper

Date: 3/6/2018 11:46:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD!

Roy Pett
Date: 3/7/2018 4:32:00 AM

Thank you so much for your congratulations Eve, I really appreciate your support and encouragement that I receive from accomplished poets such as you, thanks again Roy. :))

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 3/6/2018 10:32:00 PM

This piece is so rich with such wide spectrum of emotion, well done! Congratulations on potd! :) xomo

Roy Pett
Date: 3/7/2018 4:28:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Maureen, wow what a surprise and a honour, if I’m getting better at composing poetry it is due to support and encouragement from the amazing poets like you so thank you.

Constance La France

Date: 3/6/2018 9:54:00 PM

Roy, congratulations on POTD, wonderful writing ~

Roy Pett
Date: 3/7/2018 4:21:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations B W, I really appreciate the support and encouragement I am receiving from you and all the other amazing poets on PS, thanks again Roy. :))

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/6/2018 8:59:00 PM

This is an excellent sonnet, Roy. Congratulations on POTD but most of all for the beautiful sonnet.

Roy Pett
Date: 3/7/2018 4:14:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Daniel, I feel honoured to receive such a comment from an accomplished poet and expert in composing sonnets as you are, thanks again for your support and encouragement really appreciated. :))

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/6/2018 5:59:00 PM

Hi Roy, dropping by with my congratulations on your POTD. It is much deserved with this excellent Sonnet. Have a wonderful Wednesday. your friend....Mike.

Roy Pett
Date: 3/7/2018 4:08:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations Mike, I had a wonderful Wednesday thank you, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

Vee Sherman

Date: 3/6/2018 5:16:00 PM

Very nice work..it flows within my mind and I like it! Congratulations Roy!

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 5:19:00 PM

Thank you for your very kind comment and congratulations Vee, really appreciated. :))

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/6/2018 4:46:00 PM

Your sonnet is gorgeous and a vivid tribute to the one who colors your mind and world so vibrantly, Roy. Poetic lines of lovely imagery and beautiful rhymes express your thoughts excellently. Congratulations for your well deserved POTD honors, my friend. Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 5:03:00 PM

Thank you for your congratulations and very kind comment Susan, I really appreciate such a wonderful comment especially from an accomplished poet as you are, thanks again for your support and encouragement. :))

Rohini Balram

Date: 3/6/2018 4:39:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD. Thoroughly enjoyed the imagery the colours brought to my mind as I read each line; so vivid; loved it! Beautiful lines, 'desire to inject substantial color inspired pastels to brighten the darkness'.

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 4:46:00 PM

Thank you for your congratulations and very kind comment Rohini, so pleased you enjoyed my poem. :))

Jan Allison

Date: 3/6/2018 3:48:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations on your POTD Roy :-) hugs Jan xx

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 4:42:00 PM

Thanks Jan, what a surprise but very happy. :))

Judith S

Date: 3/6/2018 1:58:00 PM

Congratulations on POTD Roy! Beautifully crafted sonnet :) ~ Judy

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 2:06:00 PM

Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Judith, I feel so honoured. :))

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/6/2018 11:50:00 AM

Wonderful sonnet Roy, great symbolism, congratulations for POTD honors...

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 11:59:00 AM

Thank you so much for your congratulations and very kind comment Charlie, much appreciated. :))

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 3/6/2018 10:56:00 AM

I almost always like a poem that uses colors and art as symbolism. Congratulations.

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 11:33:00 AM

Thank you so much for your congratulations Sunlite much appreciated. :))

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/6/2018 7:26:00 AM

Congrats on POTD, Roy!

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 7:28:00 AM

Thank you so much for your congratulations Agnes, I really appreciate your support and encouragement. :))

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 3/6/2018 6:45:00 AM

Congratulations. Well put...

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 7:27:00 AM

Thanks Kai for your congratulations, I really appreciate your support and encouragement. :))

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/6/2018 6:25:00 AM

Congrats Roy on POTD!

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 6:45:00 AM

Thank you so much for your congratulations Vijay, I hope my writing of poetry is getting better if it is that is only through the support and encouragement from accomplished poets such as you which is much appreciated. :))

James Swartz

Date: 3/6/2018 5:36:00 AM

Great poem! Congratulations on POTD! You describe perfectly the beauty of love.

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 5:47:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and congratulations James, really pleased and honoured. :))

Silent One

Date: 3/6/2018 5:04:00 AM

Not surprised this got POTD, it is a great sonnet and well deserved accolade.

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 5:19:00 AM

Thanks again Silent One, I have learned so much since joining this site, so my improvement in writing poetry is down to the support and encouragement that I have received from the amazing poets such as you, really appreciated.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/6/2018 4:04:00 AM

Congratulations Roy on POTD. Tom

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 5:15:00 AM

Thanks Tom for your congratulations, I get so much support from the amazing poets such as you on this site, really appreciated. :))

Maria Williams

Date: 3/6/2018 4:04:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD Roy, an excellent Sonnet....Maria

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 5:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Maria for your congratulations, I feel so honoured, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/6/2018 2:55:00 AM

- Roy, congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. ! - hugs

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 5:07:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise, now it’s me saying WoW, achieving POTD has certainly made my day, feel so honoured. :)))

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/5/2018 8:40:00 PM

Ecellent Sonnet, Roy, rich and vivid. Love the visual, too. A fave for me, thanks. Regards, Viv

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 5:01:00 AM

Thanks Viv, to receive an amazing comment from an accomplished poet that writes excellent sonnets such as you is most welcome, I would also like to thank you as it was your contest that inspired me to write this, thanks again for your support, encouragement and inspiration, I am honoured that you have added this to your favourites. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2018 2:49:00 PM

- Really GORGEOUS written, Roy ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett
Date: 3/6/2018 4:55:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment Anne-Lise, I really appreciate your support and encouragement. :))