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Though We Grow Old

We’re older now. Your hair has lost its hue, yet still I fondly touch your locks of grey, and though the things so well that you could do when you were young are difficult today, I’m always by your side, for I’m your mate! We've been through much, and yet, together we can weather life’s worst storms till they abate. By now you know you can depend on me. How fast time etched its marks upon your face. It's marked me too, but look on me and know we're still the same beneath, and when I trace your features, I still see the youthful glow that mirrored mine when we were both so young, and still I think the moon by you was hung! Nov. 25, 2019 for Melani Udaeta's "I Want to Fall in Love with a Sonnet" Contest

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Date: 12/13/2019 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM Andrea. I am in tune with this poem and loved it. xxoo
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Date: 12/11/2019 7:48:00 PM
Awesome poem, true love never really dies
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Date: 12/11/2019 3:59:00 AM
Andrea congrats on your your HM!;)
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Date: 12/2/2019 5:16:00 AM
A wonderfully sweet sonnet, Andrea, time has etched its lines upon my face as well. All the best. John
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Date: 11/27/2019 4:10:00 PM
Touching poem! I am just about to send in a piece about Jerusalem to Barrs Postcard News. It is about the city of Jerusalem!! I get paid for writing for them. Not much but still - it is nice to get a check for writing! Peace & Love Matthew A
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Date: 11/27/2019 1:21:00 PM
An honest dedication of love in your own unique way..
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Date: 11/26/2019 6:34:00 PM
I told my wife the other day as I shuffled across the floor with words in my ears "straighten up'' I slowly turned and said "me...I'm still in my prime"
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Date: 11/26/2019 3:45:00 PM
The magic of a mirror to the elderly is that one looks into the mirror and does not recognise the face reflected! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 11/26/2019 9:47:00 AM
A looking Glass through time...let the feeling last forevee
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Date: 11/26/2019 9:40:00 AM
So great that you feel the same after all these years, it is a challenge for most, a great entry for the contest, hope it does well!
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Date: 11/26/2019 8:59:00 AM
Wonderfully done Andrea. This felt so good to read because of the undying love it expresses. Best wishes in the contest
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Date: 11/26/2019 8:24:00 AM
SUPERB, Andrea. Love it. Janice
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Date: 11/26/2019 7:27:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet Andrea, the winds of time blow,, but your love for one another gains strength as years pass. Good luck. Tom.
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Date: 11/26/2019 6:39:00 AM
Awesome sentiments so lovingly expressed, Andrea--a beautiful sonnet from your expert pen.
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Date: 11/26/2019 3:58:00 AM
With age wisdom comes thus the most important things in life become alive and are appreciated more! A marvelous touching poem that exalts the heart and its love dearest, Andrea!
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Date: 11/26/2019 1:41:00 AM
This is very sweet Andrea. Our feelings are the same, only our bodies change and get older. It is God's way of slowing us down to enjoy retirement. : ) xxoo
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