Thoreau's Regret

Society was petty tedium to him, but woods were friend. There, by a pond, he fashioned a simple cabin shelter and lived with mother nature as his favored captain. Simplicity was his theme and need a perspective thing. If it did not sustain, bring joy or entertain, he felt it whim. To him, accessories and treasures were error-effort reaped for they often severed and tethered his time and energy. To his surprise, one day, rays of sunshine flashed a prize so artful before his eyes that he wrapped it like a parcel and hiked home to place it in a nook on his cabin mantel. After many weeks had passed, he noticed with a gasp that his marbled, shiny keepsake shone artful no more. Smoke, ash and inside-other had all its glory covered. He could not condone what his ownership brought on. When the next day’s morning sun shone upon the pond, in fronds, freshly-nature cleaned, gleamed one stone.
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Marcum Wong Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 10:14 PM
This is another poem I really liked but couldn't leave you a message on. I am so glad that is cleared up now. Congratulations on your win CayCay. After Thanksgiving hope we can finish our colab. Have a lovely Thanksgiving my friend! ; )
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2017 at 7:39 PM
A beautiful poem for the theme, CayCay. I enjoyed reading it along with the comments you made on its background. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Salehi Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 10:29 AM
This is lovely my dear, the ending is magnificent...
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 9:41 PM
what a lovey story CayCay congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Krampe Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 8:12 AM
Nice storytelling, CayCay. Congrats on your placement.
Ashley Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 3:35 PM
Such a beautiful write CayCay and a lovely and perfect take on the theme. Your last two lines are pure and inspired. I'm sure your inspiration is smiling.., I am! Congratulations on your fine placement with this splendid write
Pigeon Tart Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations Cay Cay, an eloquently woven tale :) xomo
Barden Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 10:31 PM
Congrats on your win, CayCay!
Inman Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 7:16 PM
Hi CayCay, a lovely tale you have woven.
Godwin Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 9:43 PM
Hi, James. Thanks so much for your lovely comment. As always, I appreciate you taking the time to write. All the best ... CayCay
Lawless Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 6:35 PM
CayCay, I had to include this wonderful write in the winners as reading Thoreau in high school altered my whole relationship with the planet and its inhabitants. Thanks for participating in the contest
Godwin Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 9:40 PM
For me it was 10th grade. Homework was term paper and I was assigned Thoreau for my subject. That assignment was absolutely pivotal in the formation of me. The first hippy, and that's just the beginning of a Thoreau list, were I to create one. How cool that he impressed you in such a significant way, too. Thanks for sponsoring! Be well ... CayCay (When on his deathbed, his Aunt inquired, "have you made your peace with God?", Thoreau answered, "I did not know we had quarreled."
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November 14, 2017 at 8:50 PM
Beautiful
Breedt Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 12:22 AM
Excellent. This too is my endeavour. I m still so happy youre back
Godwin Avatar
November 13, 2017 at 5:49 AM
It is my endeavor in the sense that if I don't enjoy the maintenance of something, I don't want that something. I do have knick knacks and such that bring me visual joy, mostly handmade by family members, but nevertheless phoo-phoo items! (apparently I don't know how to spell phoo-phoo) Hugs ... CayCay
Vaso Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 9:09 PM
I really like you take on the theme, and such a lovely poem!
Godwin Avatar
November 12, 2017 at 9:28 PM
Thank you, Arthur. I have admired Thoreau since I was a teen, the first 'hippy', you know! The 'one stone' theme took me straight to thoughts of him. All the best ... CayCay
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