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This Winter

a winter that’s everlasting showing no sign of thaw we’re all under its spell lulling us to sleep having us believe it’s endless and the cycle of life dare not return succession of dreary days feeling abandoned hopeless lost under the weight the coat of snow and ice wondering if we even have it in us that flame to rise again and conquer this lifeless land AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on March 11, 2019

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Date: 3/13/2019 9:59:00 PM
Nicely done... and yes, we have it in us; we just could use a bit of encouragement from ye olde weatherman! :) gw
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Date: 3/12/2019 12:39:00 AM
Winter is rather exhausting; good news! There's always spring!!! Do ya see me smil'in?
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Date: 3/12/2019 8:37:00 AM
I hope Spring has not forgotten us. I see a bit of sun out there this morning.
Date: 3/11/2019 6:39:00 PM
Line, oh I am feeling the weight of winter too, it does seem endless , well done write ~
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Date: 3/11/2019 6:42:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Constance.
Date: 3/11/2019 2:30:00 PM
I felt it...dreadful cold...
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Date: 3/11/2019 3:06:00 PM
Where is Spring ??
Date: 3/11/2019 1:44:00 PM
Hi Line, I heard and watched the news - you had a very rough Winter, so glad that Spring is now on your doorstep. We have just entered Autumn and await our winter surprise!
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Date: 3/11/2019 3:07:00 PM
LOL. We had snow the last few days so Spring is late... Hope you have a good winter, Jennifer.

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