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This Thing - This Love

How would I define this thing – this love this aching for the warmth of summer’s sun nameless buds wriggling in the softened earth giggling at the thought of sunlight’s bees. For what is sane but love’s insanity it’s urge to find fulfillment in its need satisfaction in the bees unloving love satiation shadow dancing with the sun Oh, Love, how could you be so pure – and yet so sullied by the dust of shortened days leave me but withered petal memory hanging on the edges of your chill Oh Love how could you fail my need for you to satisfy my need for being me 3/17/2019 Spring Is In The Air Poetry Contest Emile Pinet - sponsor

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Date: 3/26/2019 8:33:00 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, John. :-) Janice
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Date: 3/26/2019 7:04:00 PM
how lovely, congrats on your win John
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Date: 3/26/2019 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations John! Your poem has placed "Second" in my PoetrySoup contest. It was a very tough contest to judge, well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 3/17/2019 6:54:00 PM
In my opinion,one of the finest sonnets I have seen all year so far. Wow if this does not make the list... oh well. We will see.
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John Lawless
Date: 3/18/2019 11:19:00 AM
Thank you for the high praise Andrea, I value your opinion and input.
Date: 3/17/2019 6:54:00 PM
and thanks so much for my trophy win.
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Date: 3/17/2019 6:14:00 PM
This poem takes the love of nature to a whole other level John! I love it! Happy St. Patrick's Day! : )
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John Lawless
Date: 3/18/2019 11:21:00 AM
Hey, Connie, spring is poking its nose into Boston just in time for the St. Paddy's Day Parade in Southie. It sorta teased the muse to melancholic meandering
Date: 3/17/2019 10:34:00 AM
So beautiful, and so poignant those last two lines.
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John Lawless
Date: 3/18/2019 11:22:00 AM
Thanks for stopping to read and comment

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