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The sun came out! Just as my heart leapt through the leaves, Left over from last fall, when it was interrupted The sun left again! Undecided, after all these days of rain and gray Seasons flash by, like floods in the street Then linger long, like the puddles left behind How can one know what may happen next? Walking the shining pavement, as it turns dry What was once showing, is suddenly gone But this space, still holds my footsteps Heidi Sands 5/4/19

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Date: 5/24/2019 9:37:00 PM
Lovely, Heidi, Such vivid imagery, and descriptive wording. Would we want to know what happens next? To think about...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/25/2019 10:12:00 AM
Thank you ! Good question. :)
Date: 5/12/2019 10:12:00 AM
Forever...A lovely write Heidi...Who knows...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/12/2019 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Arturo :)
Date: 5/8/2019 8:42:00 PM
A heart that leaps through the leaves! A space still holding footsteps! Such vivid imagery. Such a seamless blending of the natural and the human. Such a gorgeous poem. A FAVE for me! Blessings, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/9/2019 8:12:00 AM
Great to hear. Thank you so much Gershon :)
Date: 5/7/2019 6:40:00 AM
Amazing poem; we all want to know that we left our mark somewhere in this world; that our lives mattered. Beautifully penned.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/7/2019 8:09:00 AM
Thank you very much M.L. Nice to see your kind comment today. Have a nice day :)
Date: 5/6/2019 8:45:00 AM
there is a place for all to call their own which you have found. and a place to return to . enjoyed your write.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/6/2019 11:44:00 AM
Thank you. I am happy you enjoyed this :)
Date: 5/5/2019 5:14:00 PM
Beautifully written Heidi...
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/5/2019 5:44:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 5/5/2019 8:09:00 AM
The sun is playing hide and seek..the gray will soon pass..the space that holds your footsteps still shines! Lovely capture of this moody spring, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/5/2019 5:44:00 PM
Yes! Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your comment very much :)
Date: 5/5/2019 6:37:00 AM
There is no sun here at the moment and ti looks like it is gonna rain... oh the British weather! Enjoyed your poem Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/5/2019 5:43:00 PM
We have had days of gray and rain, non stop. I can't wait until we have a full day of sunshine soon! Still some piles of snow under the trees too. . I am happy you enjoyed this. I hope you have sun soon. Thanks for your comment :)
Date: 5/4/2019 7:04:00 PM
The changing of weather does change the mood and the colors of the world. Nicely done, Heidi. Hugs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/4/2019 7:05:00 PM
Yes, it sure does. Thank you Eve. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 5/4/2019 6:29:00 PM
lovely thoughts, heidi...much enjoyed!..huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/4/2019 6:40:00 PM
Thank you Nette. I appreciate your visit. Have a nice evening :)

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