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This Race, My Test

Two minutes left this race, my test A minute-and-a-half hope it's not my epitaph Sixty seconds now churn legs harder; some way, somehow Down to forty-five breathe in and out; stay alive Half-a-minute C'mon, faster; gotta win it Fifteen seconds finish line beckons Final tick guess who's sick...

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Date: 1/3/2023 7:47:00 AM
Hope your feeling better my friend and this is not a reflection on how your feeling if it is I wish you good health and rest.
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Date: 1/2/2023 1:38:00 PM
Sounds like me on my treadmill :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/3/2023 5:25:00 PM
Nothing like that finish line, eh?!
Date: 1/2/2023 10:51:00 AM
RUN FORREST RUN.......
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/3/2023 5:24:00 PM
Gumpety, gumpety, gump...
Date: 1/2/2023 10:14:00 AM
Never give up gw :) "Feet, don't fail me now!"
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 1/3/2023 7:28:00 PM
I stand corrected. It is feets!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/3/2023 5:23:00 PM
Gosh, you're grammar is good. I always heard it as 'Feets, don't fail me now!' lol
Date: 1/2/2023 4:32:00 AM
Life is a hard race, and most don't make it to finish line well and whole. Glad you made it even though sick. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 1/1/2023 8:49:00 PM
Ha last line a beauty!! Debx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/2/2023 6:40:00 PM
Anybody have a barf bag? lol. Thanks, Deb

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