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This Is My Surreal

This lonely road I walk upon, it’s broken, 
It goes to “Who knows where?”
This road is torn and ripped apart, 
And it doesn’t seem to care,

About where it leads my little life, 
I guess it doesn’t matter anyway,
It just throws emotional pits and holes, 
Not listening to what I say,

But, this lonely road I walk along, 
Is going through a forest of free,
Where I can hear the songs of birds, 
Sing from each ancient tree.

So, even though this road is torn, 
It’s mine, it’s my surreal,
This road takes me to “Who knows where?”
And that’s fine, that’s how I feel.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 9:35 PM
Lewis, I love this one and how you ended up on a road that is fine and though surreal, is exactly how you feel. I agree with Judith. Great flow and rhyme!
Raynes Avatar
December 3, 2017 at 9:43 PM
Thank you Andrea, I'm glad u liked this surreal take :)
S     Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 12:35 PM
Love it Lewis!! You are so great at flow and rhyme! This is a great take on life ... and the graphic is perfect!
Raynes Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 7:42 PM
Thanks Judy, glad you can relate to this one, :)
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