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When I was but a child, I sure was not too popular or all that great in school. I tried to make good friends; I tried a lot with all the girls considered to be cool. I wished to be with them but played the fool. They’d talk to me alone but would not stoop to letting me hang out in their tight group. It made me feel forlorn to know that I was always being left out of the loop. But soon would come my time, and I would fly! As if emerging from a dark cocoon, I did not know what I would come to be. My time was coming though, and it came soon! In junior high, the teachers noticed me. My confidence grew fantastically. My former way of seeking friends I saw had never worked because of one big flaw: I wasted time with girls who just were not a fit for me! My soul was filled with awe to know that girls like ME were whom I sought! I felt so happy as I looked around with new perspective, for it meant I could feel free when other girls like me I found! I grew in mind and body. It felt good to have new friends and form a sisterhood. In junior high, my wit was at its peak. I lived for sleepovers and was not meek. I talked to boys, and not since I’d been born was I so happy. Life is sometimes bleak, but since that time, I’ve never felt forlorn! Feb. 10, 2018 for 'The Magic Of Three' Poetry Contest of Broken Wings

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Date: 3/26/2018 12:48:00 PM
I was a late bloomer, I noticed in my year book not that many people signed it, I spent all my free time in school, conversing with teachers and not students, I had a particular way of looking at the world at an early age, and they liked my company, after high school came the disco days,   Do the bump
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Date: 2/15/2018 10:13:00 AM
Yepper - every adolescent should read this. Oh, the anguish of belonging and the stupidity of it are both aptly and poetically presented in your fine flowing poem (not that you alluded to stupidity). I enjoyed this, and see it did well. I'm glad for that, and for you. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 2/13/2018 9:17:00 AM
Andrea congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem with a message, well done !
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Date: 2/13/2018 12:29:00 AM
Yaaay! Knew it would fare well, Andrea, congrats! Viv x
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:55:00 PM
Back with congratulations on your win ! Great poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/12/2018 1:40:00 PM
- For adults, this sounds perhaps innocent, but there is a threat that contains a lot of power in young children's universe - So glad your story ended with happy memories, Andrea - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/12/2018 1:00:00 AM
Oh Andrea...you and I have a lot in common. In fact, I bet a lot of us poetic types had the same problem til we finally found those kids like us. Love the poem and love you. You're a sweetheart. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/12/2018 12:21:00 AM
Melts me to read this! You are one of the beautiful ones in my heart!
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Date: 2/11/2018 9:13:00 PM
Andrea, I think you’re as cool as they get. You have such a kind and warm heart. You’re pretty amazing. :).
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Date: 2/11/2018 11:50:00 AM
A great bio and a story that relates to a lot of us which is worthy of a winner, Andrea!
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Date: 2/11/2018 9:21:00 AM
A motivational poem...That everyone should read...All the best Andrea
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Date: 2/11/2018 9:20:00 AM
And what a wonderful person you have developed into.. I bet none of them are as successful or content in life.. A well expressed poem..
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Date: 2/11/2018 8:54:00 AM
Great story Andrea..Definitely a winner... Beautiful narration... Enjoyed it thoroughly...
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Date: 2/11/2018 8:23:00 AM
Well Andrea, it takes us all a bit of time to realize that "tuning forks" do not resonate with all.......only those attuned to their frequency......Alas, so it is with people. Glad you survived those "painful" early years. Really like this one.
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Date: 2/11/2018 7:11:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this story, written simply with an elegant message on friends and friendships. Your poem is a winning entry/memory, Andrea.
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Date: 2/11/2018 5:08:00 AM
A lovely memory! I stayed shy until I left school! It was then my wings grew :) <3 Nicely done, sweet lady!
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Date: 2/11/2018 12:56:00 AM
This should be sent to every school and put on the notice board, Andrea. A fine write, and all credit to you for treading your own path. Viv x
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Date: 2/10/2018 11:14:00 PM
You made me think of my time when i was young in school... Kids can be so cruel... Enjoyed reading .. Luck in the contest
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Date: 2/10/2018 11:06:00 PM
That is a truly delightful poem. Wish I met you in grade school and been friends through high school. Charming, Andrea.
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Date: 2/10/2018 10:53:00 PM
A nicely flowing poem, Andrea. It's so true. I personally know such situations happening.
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