This Happy Memory

My first grandchild was turning three,
sweet girl with a motherly bent.
The perfect present seemed to be
a dollhouse; so, shopping we went.
She found one not by accident -
real bells for the front and back door,
three stories, carpet on the floor
two-car garage, a three bedroom,
kitchen and bath. Who could want more?
Memory on the breeze, presumed.

She had moved on, Kid's Kraft was done. 
Trying to hide my discontent,
I asked, “What is wrong with this one?” 
“It’s not real.” Not like home she meant;
her place, the five-room flat they rent.
The Little People caught her eye 
"Here is my house," I heard her cry.
there's mom, dad and me, just like home."
With three dolls to boot, a good buy;
no chic decor, no polychrome.

Happy memory? not so true,
but truly it is in a way.
Only one went shopping, not two.
I bought that dollhouse on display
the fancy one, for her birthday
and sensed her dissatisfaction.
Her mom had bought the other one,
small with three dolls a child could clutch.
Three’s magic, mom’s gift so much fun
while mine sat at my house untouched.

written 02/03/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 3/1/2018 6:21:00 PM
Hello Reason A.Poteet, this is a good memory of the past of your grandchild. Havea nice evening my friend.
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Date: 3/1/2018 6:48:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting on a special piece for me, it was a memory bittersweet in nature. You just made my evening better, thanks for the good wishes.
Date: 2/18/2018 7:35:00 PM
Dizian..never heard of this, My ignorance is still my bliss. I enjoyed way you expressed the reality of our efforts. Hope in real life they will be satisfied with necessities of life not chase Jones's. Congrats.
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Date: 3/1/2018 6:52:00 PM
She's 16 now and typically a peer-oriented girl but she (like her mom) has a heart as big as gold and my biggest concern is that friends will take advantage of her generosity. Thanks for commenting. I have always been interested in any new form (new to me anyway) and usually give them at least one try.
Date: 2/13/2018 2:19:00 PM
Reason, congratulations on your win in my contest with this memory, well done, not an easy form !
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Date: 2/13/2018 4:46:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, I appreciate your comment and the contest. A very nice prompt on which to write. Thanks for the placement
Date: 2/13/2018 12:35:00 AM
Congratulations, Reason, you work the form so well. Regards, Viv
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Reason! Great poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/12/2018 9:57:00 PM
Thanks, Eve, I like the form best of all. Have done many.
Date: 2/11/2018 6:50:00 PM
Oh... the pleasures of gift giving... Your poem hits a chord... Well done, Reason.
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Reason A. Poteet
Date: 2/12/2018 5:14:00 AM
Thanks, Line, you are right- about the pleasure of giving
Date: 2/9/2018 8:50:00 AM
A dizain is not easy, but you have done is so well and written a very good poem...
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Date: 2/10/2018 9:01:00 AM
My thanks, Silent One, I always welcome your kinds remarks and any suggestions for improvement would also be welcomed from a poet of your skill.
Date: 2/8/2018 7:48:00 AM
This really reached me. What a well written story in this poem :)
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Date: 2/8/2018 3:05:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi, true story as told in stanza three
Date: 2/3/2018 3:22:00 PM
i see you do have a heart for little ones. This is so sweet, and I might say, so common. Thanks for your comments to mine.
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Date: 2/8/2018 4:01:00 AM
Thanks, sunlite, what a lovely comment.
Date: 2/1/2018 7:55:00 PM
OH my, we cherish what we KNOW. What is real to us That is the message I feel in this poignant write. Glad to see you back with some new poems!!
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Date: 2/2/2018 7:55:00 AM
Thanks, spent several months cleaning and moving in 2017 - June til September. Good to be back your comments are encouragement to start writing.
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