This Happy Memory

My first grandchild was turning three,
sweet girl with a motherly bent.
The perfect present seemed to be
a dollhouse; so, shopping we went.
She found one not by accident -
real bells for the front and back door,
three stories, carpet on the floor
two-car garage, a three bedroom,
kitchen and bath. Who could want more?
Memory on the breeze, presumed.

She had moved on, Kid's Kraft was done. 
Trying to hide my discontent,
I asked, “What is wrong with this one?” 
“It’s not real.” Not like home she meant;
her place, the five-room flat they rent.
The Little People caught her eye 
"Here is my house," I heard her cry.
there's mom, dad and me, just like home."
With three dolls to boot, a good buy;
no chic decor, no polychrome.

Happy memory? not so true,
but truly it is in a way.
Only one went shopping, not two.
I bought that dollhouse on display
the fancy one, for her birthday
and sensed her dissatisfaction.
Her mom had bought the other one,
small with three dolls a child could clutch.
Three’s magic, mom’s gift so much fun
while mine sat at my house untouched.

written 02/03/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 6:21 PM
Hello Reason A.Poteet, this is a good memory of the past of your grandchild. Havea nice evening my friend.
Poteet Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 6:48 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting on a special piece for me, it was a memory bittersweet in nature. You just made my evening better, thanks for the good wishes.
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 7:35 PM
Dizian..never heard of this, My ignorance is still my bliss. I enjoyed way you expressed the reality of our efforts. Hope in real life they will be satisfied with necessities of life not chase Jones's. Congrats.
Poteet Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 6:52 PM
She's 16 now and typically a peer-oriented girl but she (like her mom) has a heart as big as gold and my biggest concern is that friends will take advantage of her generosity. Thanks for commenting. I have always been interested in any new form (new to me anyway) and usually give them at least one try.
La France Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 2:19 PM
Reason, congratulations on your win in my contest with this memory, well done, not an easy form !
Poteet Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 4:46 PM
Thank you, Constance, I appreciate your comment and the contest. A very nice prompt on which to write. Thanks for the placement
Wigley Avatar
February 13, 2018 at 12:35 AM
Congratulations, Reason, you work the form so well. Regards, Viv
Roper Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 9:49 PM
Congratulations on your win, Reason! Great poem. Hugs Eve ~`*
Poteet Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 9:57 PM
Thanks, Eve, I like the form best of all. Have done many.
Gauthier Avatar
February 11, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Oh... the pleasures of gift giving... Your poem hits a chord... Well done, Reason.
Poteet Avatar
February 12, 2018 at 5:14 AM
Thanks, Line, you are right- about the pleasure of giving
One Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 8:50 AM
A dizain is not easy, but you have done is so well and written a very good poem...
Poteet Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 9:01 AM
My thanks, Silent One, I always welcome your kinds remarks and any suggestions for improvement would also be welcomed from a poet of your skill.
Sands Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 7:48 AM
This really reached me. What a well written story in this poem :)
Poteet Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 3:05 PM
Thank you, Heidi, true story as told in stanza three
Wanter Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 3:22 PM
i see you do have a heart for little ones. This is so sweet, and I might say, so common. Thanks for your comments to mine.
Poteet Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:01 AM
Thanks, sunlite, what a lovely comment.
Dietrich Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 7:55 PM
OH my, we cherish what we KNOW. What is real to us That is the message I feel in this poignant write. Glad to see you back with some new poems!!
Poteet Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 7:55 AM
Thanks, spent several months cleaning and moving in 2017 - June til September. Good to be back your comments are encouragement to start writing.
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