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This Buds For You

-This buds for you!- -It takes one to know one!- -I know you are, but what am I?- A second hand, on my stopwatch, going nowhere! You are a joker, a smoker, a midnight stroker <-------How, about that, Steve Miller song I'm not here to talk about the way you comment a poem That's not how I roll, now listen, and listen well, I don't care, about them words you speak A whining sheep, every time you don't score Crying behind close doors, Boo-Who, I did not place high in so-and-so's contest Gosh&dammit, not everyone's on a quest Blogging, about the day, your poem got demoted to nonsense Trying to comment relentlessly, You can't top, a mountain that has no setup I'd rather leave a copy paste comment, "than being fake as fake can be" At least, my copy paste was a song, in which welcome the new poets on Treating, everyone with love and security Your invites, are cold and force, to you it's not about community No motion, to your notion, simple, and disgusting I don't know why you think, we are competing, Long ago, I left you bleeding, no reason to be defeating Your paranoia, has you thinking, it's all about the points, It's getting old and boring, You cry babies are nothing more than jokes and hypocrites Hey you, this ain't dominoes, we done pass every Jo-Jo When, I have time I sit here for fun, my trigger finger on the gun Reading, commenting, until my day is done You think, because someone, left a copy paste That your poem was not read, Perhaps, it was not understood, or enjoyed Or, a welcome to the neighborhood A nice smile, from me to you Nice poem, You Rock! So What! ---- WOW! This Bud's for you I think it's time for you to GET A LIFE! Be glad someone took their time, in checking you out twice Not, everyone on this site, is full of bull-**** The smallest words, are more likely to be legit I don't need and expensive comment, I don't want to impress, when it comes to the best comment Please do not make love to my poem! A nice pat on my back will do, Now that my friend, puts a smile on my face To know you care, to know you were there:) Peace Out, ~SKAT~

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Date: 5/11/2017 7:47:00 PM
Patting you on the back here,Skat!! I hope it puts a smile on your face, sweetie!
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Date: 8/4/2016 7:54:00 AM
Pat on the back for you. And you are correct in saying, that life and therefore poetry is not a race...
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Date: 5/8/2016 12:11:00 PM
I like your anger a lot because it's the strike that has lit finally lit up the gasoline in me. I'm more driven than ever to share as many of my poems as I can now that I'm on fire courtesy of this. My dearest SKAT,watch this space and you will be proud of what you did to me!!! Thanks my dear and lots of hugs.
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Date: 2/22/2016 10:03:00 AM
Hey SKAT! I'm gonna say that I absolutely love this poem. I'm wondering if I could use this poem for a forensics poetry piece. I would just kinda need your name. Thanks!
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Date: 1/12/2016 8:11:00 PM
Yes, i do remember this one from when i was on before Skat. I started to tone down my comments, not really me, but i did try. I reckon, right or wrong, i just want people to know what i as a person think about their work. Now, let us see if i can do this, just the once. I understand the message, a good piece that gets the point across. Your friend Vladislav.
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Date: 12/29/2015 9:38:00 AM
Perfect. Sarcastic and it seems like it did you a lot of good to write it. I have to say, I admire and love you, Skat.
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Date: 12/6/2015 6:40:00 PM
You rock Skat! There is nothing like telling it like it is. Well done.
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Date: 12/5/2015 9:12:00 AM
What a lovely poem! Spectacular and mind romancing. A 7 and an excellent share
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Date: 8/11/2015 3:29:00 PM
Hey, Skat, just dropping by to let you know I see you up to lot around here. and ALL GOOD!!
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Date: 8/10/2015 6:39:00 PM
I don't know who pissed you off....but you did like we do in the south....get your weight up is what we say....we are too grown for the games they play....lol....remind me not to make you mad skat....lol
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Date: 6/26/2015 10:45:00 PM
very original in style and content
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Date: 6/23/2015 11:41:00 AM
You rock, SKAT! :-)
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Date: 6/19/2015 9:13:00 PM
Interesting poem. You seem fierce though tamed. Lol it was awesome reading how deep the worm hole goes around these parts.
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Date: 6/16/2015 6:35:00 PM
wow well said and written Skat it should be about the poetry not the poet the words should be joyous, sad, deep and dark whatever they are they should be from the heart untainted by every day life hugs 7
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Date: 5/28/2015 10:36:00 AM
I agree that most people think way too much of themselves and their poetry. When loosing, figure out how to make poetry better, don't make the situation worse.
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Date: 5/24/2015 8:44:00 AM
A flower bud for you, Linda!!!!!
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Date: 5/23/2015 8:41:00 AM
thanks skat a this one read early in the morning made me happy to slap the asshole with his boo cry thank you friend as not every one needs a reward to feel worthy to share the world
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Date: 5/17/2015 11:38:00 PM
Lol... This poem made me laugh...like alot! nice poem :)
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Date: 5/12/2015 4:25:00 PM
Hi Skat, having read this poem I won't rate it as you don't need to rate mine either. A poem is a poem yo. The main reason I came on this poetry site was to get away from thinking I have to comment on everyones' poetry. Comments are welcome and indeed encouraging but not essential. The reason I like this poem is it doesn't pull any strings, doesn't play to the ego and puts things into perspective. It is how it is....end of. Eddie
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:01:00 PM
Amazing poem skat :)
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Date: 5/9/2015 4:47:00 AM
Wow,Skat. Amazing poem. Makes me wonder what ugliness was spoken to you. Only the 'very thick' would miss your point. I have enjoyed reading several of your poems. Already I am feeling pulled out of the 'box'. Thanks for your welcome to me here in the Soup.
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:30:00 PM
'When I have time, I sit here for fun, my trigger finger on the gun' - Love it the image, SKAT.
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Date: 4/26/2015 11:37:00 AM
Full of passion, A quote from my dear departed Nan "Opinions are like bum holes, everyone has one . . . and they usually smell" Great poem SKAT. EM
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Date: 4/18/2015 12:09:00 PM
Wow! You're reading my mind! I'm new here and I find it isn't easy to be on the soup... or should I say in the soup! Should I say something nice? How should I rate something that I don't like? How can I be heard without playing the rating game? I personally do not like this rating system they've set up. But anyway you do a nice job of putting all these kinds of thoughts into words. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 4/16/2015 8:56:00 AM
Lovely chewing-out there, Skat! : ) (this is not sarcasm)
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