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This Is Eden

Your nakedness in the morning light, Surrounds the JOY I received last night. Together we watched the glow of the Moon, Knowing this moment would end to soon. Sinful Shadows of my Lustful greed, YOUR Forever Love: what I want and need. The sweet fragrance of Your Innocence, Waifs through the grieving of forgotten sense. Forever and Always, through all these years : Our tale of Love, and sex, and all its Fears. WOW..For My EVE.. " BARBARA JEAN "

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/16/2010 5:17:00 PM
very sweet dedication for yours :) nice write, keep sharing and stay blessed!
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Date: 6/5/2010 4:21:00 AM
I like the poem. The expression of love. seem to have man to loose his place in the garden. The priceof love has been trouble and hardship.
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Date: 6/1/2010 1:31:00 PM
Terrific HG, a joy to read. Many congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's fine contest >> James
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Date: 5/31/2010 8:15:00 PM
Well, my Adam..our tale is out there for all to see..you sinful, lustful Adam you.. Im proud of you..lets see how your Eve does..BG
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Date: 5/31/2010 5:23:00 PM
Congrats on the win
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Date: 5/31/2010 4:47:00 PM
Congrats HG my silent beau on your success in my ADAM in Eden contest with this dynamic write.. with luv from your forever "Sweetheart"..hope u are feeling much better today... luv..
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Date: 5/28/2010 8:16:00 PM
Perfect! do not touch anything... its great.. my silent beau... SOUP MAIL... with luv from your forever "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/27/2010 6:17:00 PM
ahhhhh if we only we NOt taught "lovemaking" was sin?....did you want to check line 7 innocence...to help you win! Light & Love
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Date: 5/25/2010 12:02:00 AM
the fourth stanza is beautiful. and everything in this write of your is passionate a pure and sweet essence. outstanding and heartfelt love writes from you as always. i love you always spirit brother.& good luck as well.(: -Always&Forever your sister spirit Lynn
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Date: 5/24/2010 4:19:00 AM
enjoyed the read, nice entry with your poem, the best of luck,..p..d
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Date: 5/24/2010 3:49:00 AM
Wish you all the best in the contest. I like the first passionate couplet
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