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Thirst

Gray rain clouds gather Heavy hovering above Earth takes a deep breath

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Jack Horne

Date: 5/11/2014 5:43:00 PM

wow, love this - hope it was a big winner if for a contest. Hope you're having a wonderful MD and thanks again for Mum's card. Have a lovely week. Love you, my friend xx

Milton Toran

Date: 11/7/2009 10:05:00 PM

The title blends so perfectly with this haiku. Especially the last line..."Earth takes a deep breath". Beautiful haiku! Milt

Elaine George

Date: 11/6/2009 6:13:00 AM

AWESOME HAIKU, AUDREY. THANK YOU FOR SHARING AND THANK YOU FOR ALL YOUR KIND COMMENTS. LOVE, LAINIE

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/3/2009 10:58:00 AM

You have written another nice haiku, Audrey. It is enjoyable to read your work. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/2/2009 2:03:00 PM

those are some scary clouds I have one to type about them to somehwere in my purse on a grocery reciept! LOL Light & Love

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 10/28/2009 4:19:00 PM

Love the last line! WOnderful Haiku Audry! Thank you for your comments also, ~Trudy~

P Sheart

Date: 10/26/2009 11:27:00 AM

Hi Audrey, I love the visual in this outstanding Haiku. The last line is awesome. Thanks for sharing. Smile...Love Light Truth Patty

Brian Strand

Date: 10/22/2009 12:12:00 AM

Fine work Audrey.especially L3 Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

John Freeman

Date: 10/21/2009 6:20:00 PM

Earth takes a deep breath, getting ready to take a much needed drink, Smile! Sincerely, Love, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 10/21/2009 1:48:00 PM

Heavenly Haiku Audrey >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/21/2009 11:56:00 AM

I see the clouds and feel the moisture. Very well done. Keep writing. Sara

Adell Foster

Date: 10/20/2009 12:28:00 PM

Audrey this is a very lovely haiku, excellent imagery presented in traditional form. I thank you for sharing the read. God Bless, Always, Adell

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/20/2009 11:12:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku Audrey. We can say so much with few words. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol

Daver Austin

Date: 10/20/2009 10:54:00 AM

Hi, Audrey. I love haiku. This one is very fine. Thanks for reading my stuff. Love, daver