Thinking Outside the Bag

Hi, You took an idea that has been used to the point of overuse and put your original spin on it. Love it. - Gail

Thanks for digging up my old haiku, by the way ... much appreciated (not everything I write is long-winded ... hahaha).

INTRIGUING ... and yes it's true ... Personally, I think it's baffling that we are all just staring at black, weird little shapes when we read poetry (and yet tremendous images pop into our head at an instant). It doesn't seem mere matter is capable of such a feat ... and yet here we are.

I like this. and I also saw that Star Trek, "Ugly giant bags of mostly water!" LOL

Hello Maureen, this poem also gives the reader something to ponder. A great poem. Be safe. Enjoy your evening my fiend.

Your writing is captivating. I must stop by your place more often. From one bag to another ***NiynaChe

Very clever my friend. You are an original thinker. Stay well my friend.

Shalom, shalOM Mo. U have a beautiful mind. Of course, you are more than the "bag" (Matter of fact, in each bag, the BREATH is a WIND or Breath & BREADTH of the Universe.) Even the MIND is more than MATTER! Thanks DEar.

" a bag of matter" - snicker. snicker. Good one Maureen.

' however it began/it was all about the end' - That line really got my attention, I think, whatever you believe, it's about finding the meaningful in the mystery of 'the end' - simply fascinating, Maureen!

Makes me think of Star Trek. The aliens called us humans “Ugly bags of water”. The thing about God is that our belief in Him has no bearing on His existence. That however cannot be said of other gods.