Thinking of Writing My First Haiku

Hm, hm, hm, hm, hm,

Hm, hm, hm, hm, hm, hm, hm

Hm, hm, hm, hm, hm
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Gauthier Avatar
November 4, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Nice rhythm, Mike.
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 1:28 PM
ha ha ha ha ha Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha
Dietrich Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 1:28 PM
DAng, my ha's did not come out on three separate lines!!!
Gorelick Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Very good! Because there is sup to be a change in thought, or turn at the end.....why don't you end it Ah, Ah, Ah, Ah, Ah... Sorry, feeling silly this morning. BG
Gazbowski Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 10:49 AM
haha :-)
Hoffman Avatar
May 30, 2016 at 8:35 AM
Mike, you have a good sense of humor!LOL!:)
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