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Thinking of Writing My First Haiku

Hm, hm, hm, hm, hm, Hm, hm, hm, hm, hm, hm, hm Hm, hm, hm, hm, hm

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/4/2018 11:26:00 AM

Nice rhythm, Mike.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2016 1:28:00 PM

ha ha ha ha ha Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/30/2016 1:28:00 PM

DAng, my ha's did not come out on three separate lines!!!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/30/2016 12:01:00 PM

Very good! Because there is sup to be a change in thought, or turn at the end.....why don't you end it Ah, Ah, Ah, Ah, Ah... Sorry, feeling silly this morning. BG

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/30/2016 10:49:00 AM

haha :-)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 5/30/2016 8:35:00 AM

Mike, you have a good sense of humor!LOL!:)