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Thievery

in locking away our heart....... we become the thief of our own happiness This poem is my reaction to Casarah's latest poem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/6/2015 12:38:00 AM
Those are the truest words i have read today. Def a7!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/6/2015 8:14:00 AM
Thanks Njeri.
Date: 12/17/2014 4:22:00 AM
so true richard i agree with you on this excellent pen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/17/2014 8:48:00 AM
Thanks Liam
Date: 12/15/2014 6:31:00 AM
So much said with so few words, an exquisite broken monoku.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/17/2014 8:50:00 AM
Thanks Maurice.
Date: 12/13/2014 12:11:00 PM
This is quite the maxim, friend! Everything we do to others, in the end, we do to ourselves. Time to break the vicious cycle :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/17/2014 8:49:00 AM
Goodmorning and thanks Timothy.
Date: 12/13/2014 1:49:00 AM
Oh my, so very true....Seren
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/13/2014 8:18:00 AM
Hi Seren, thanks for visiting.
Date: 12/12/2014 11:38:00 PM
Richard, how utterly profound! So true and memorable. Outstanding my friend!#7 I am fav'ing this one.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/13/2014 8:19:00 AM
You are sweet Connie, thanks.
Date: 12/12/2014 10:53:00 PM
Wow, you just gave me one of those awe moments. I never want to forget this it's so brilliant. 7+fav.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/13/2014 8:20:00 AM
Wow Brenda, thanks!
Date: 12/12/2014 4:20:00 PM
:) Babe, I love it! You made me smile, and that monoku was awesome! You are awesome my friend!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/13/2014 8:22:00 AM
Hi Casarah, if not for you these words would not have come into being.
Date: 12/12/2014 10:40:00 AM
Fantastic dear, Richard!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2014 10:43:00 AM
Thanks Demetrios.
Date: 12/12/2014 9:58:00 AM
Wonderful, short sweet and absolutely true.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/12/2014 10:04:00 AM
Thanks Monterey.
Date: 12/11/2014 6:15:00 AM
so true, and well put
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/11/2014 7:19:00 AM
Thanks Scott
Date: 12/10/2014 4:05:00 PM
This is true, Richard. Sad...but true. But I understand that sometimes it has to be done. Repeated pain...is just no fun. Great write, though.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2014 5:05:00 PM
Thanks Eileen, if you get a chance check out my poems "In a Slump" and "Greeny".
Date: 12/10/2014 3:43:00 PM
Locked hearts over time become difficult to reopen . . . I have not read Casarah's poem but this was outstanding.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2014 5:06:00 PM
Try a little WD40, that stuff works miracles.
Date: 12/10/2014 3:20:00 PM
wow, this is really GOOD, Richard. And a good one for our Casarah.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2014 5:07:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 12/10/2014 2:46:00 PM
Great write, Richard. A broken monoku that could lead to a broken heart. // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2014 5:07:00 PM
Thanks Paul.
Date: 12/10/2014 2:31:00 PM
so so true Richard and i will drop by and read casarah's poem:-) Hugs jan xxx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/10/2014 2:32:00 PM
Thanks Jan, hugs to you as well.

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