Home » Poems » Richard Lamoureux » Thievery

Thievery

in locking away our heart....... 
                                  we become the thief of our own happiness


This poem is my reaction to Casarah's latest poem.

angstcouragelossmonoku

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Njeri Hunjeri

March 6, 2015 at 12:38 AM

Those are the truest words i have read today. Def a7!

Richard Lamoureux

March 6, 2015 at 8:14 AM

Thanks Njeri.

Liam Mcdaid

December 17, 2014 at 4:22 AM

so true richard i agree with you on this excellent pen

Richard Lamoureux

December 17, 2014 at 8:48 AM

Thanks Liam

Maurice Yvonne

December 15, 2014 at 6:31 AM

So much said with so few words, an exquisite broken monoku.

Richard Lamoureux

December 17, 2014 at 8:50 AM

Thanks Maurice.

Timothy Hicks

December 13, 2014 at 12:11 PM

This is quite the maxim, friend! Everything we do to others, in the end, we do to ourselves. Time to break the vicious cycle :)

Richard Lamoureux

December 17, 2014 at 8:49 AM

Goodmorning and thanks Timothy.

Seren Roberts

December 13, 2014 at 1:49 AM

Oh my, so very true....Seren

Richard Lamoureux

December 13, 2014 at 8:18 AM

Hi Seren, thanks for visiting.

Connie Marcum Wong

December 12, 2014 at 11:38 PM

Richard, how utterly profound! So true and memorable. Outstanding my friend!#7 I am fav'ing this one.

Richard Lamoureux

December 13, 2014 at 8:19 AM

You are sweet Connie, thanks.

Brenda Meier-Hans

December 12, 2014 at 10:53 PM

Wow, you just gave me one of those awe moments. I never want to forget this it's so brilliant. 7+fav.

Richard Lamoureux

December 13, 2014 at 8:20 AM

Wow Brenda, thanks!

Casarah Nance

December 12, 2014 at 4:20 PM

:) Babe, I love it! You made me smile, and that monoku was awesome! You are awesome my friend!

Richard Lamoureux

December 13, 2014 at 8:22 AM

Hi Casarah, if not for you these words would not have come into being.

Demetrios Trifiatis

December 12, 2014 at 10:40 AM

Fantastic dear, Richard!

Richard Lamoureux

December 12, 2014 at 10:43 AM

Thanks Demetrios.

Monterey Sirak

December 12, 2014 at 9:58 AM

Wonderful, short sweet and absolutely true.

Richard Lamoureux

December 12, 2014 at 10:04 AM

Thanks Monterey.

Scott Thirtyseven

December 11, 2014 at 6:15 AM

so true, and well put

Richard Lamoureux

December 11, 2014 at 7:19 AM

Thanks Scott

Eileen Manassian

December 10, 2014 at 4:05 PM

This is true, Richard. Sad...but true. But I understand that sometimes it has to be done. Repeated pain...is just no fun. Great write, though.

Richard Lamoureux

December 10, 2014 at 5:05 PM

Thanks Eileen, if you get a chance check out my poems "In a Slump" and "Greeny".

David Meade

December 10, 2014 at 3:43 PM

Locked hearts over time become difficult to reopen . . . I have not read Casarah's poem but this was outstanding.

Richard Lamoureux

December 10, 2014 at 5:06 PM

Try a little WD40, that stuff works miracles.

Andrea Dietrich

December 10, 2014 at 3:20 PM

wow, this is really GOOD, Richard. And a good one for our Casarah.

Richard Lamoureux

December 10, 2014 at 5:07 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Paul Callus

December 10, 2014 at 2:46 PM

Great write, Richard. A broken monoku that could lead to a broken heart. // paul

Richard Lamoureux

December 10, 2014 at 5:07 PM

Thanks Paul.

Jan Allison

December 10, 2014 at 2:31 PM

so so true Richard and i will drop by and read casarah's poem:-) Hugs jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux

December 10, 2014 at 2:32 PM

Thanks Jan, hugs to you as well.

Thievery

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources