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These Eyes

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/29/2015 6:06:00 PM

Hi Charmaine, I enjoyed reading this one again. I see you took my small suggestion. I hope this greeting finds you well.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/21/2015 12:12:00 AM

This is a good poem. Well done -JT

Michael Cannizzaro

Date: 3/4/2015 11:57:00 AM

Such a romantic,beautifully written poem. Your work is great!

William Gray

Date: 1/30/2015 1:03:00 AM

Great images, I enjoyed the magical flow of this piece !

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 1/14/2015 10:14:00 AM

Howdy Charma! It has been awhile, and I must confess that I have missed reading your poems so I am glad that you reminded me to read a few. Prettier than ever I say.

Justin Bordner

Date: 1/13/2015 2:57:00 AM

You're so strongly romantic Charma, you simply refuse to lose love, your heart so beautifully persistent to nurture fine passion. "Of dreams we are Belongers...Fearless on the verge of nothingness." That's fierce love Poetess...J.A.B.

Sandip Goswami

Date: 1/10/2015 3:01:00 PM

Super thoughts...God bless you my dear...One day you will touch the sky.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/9/2015 7:46:00 AM

Change impregnate to impregnates and your poem will be perfect. I really enjoyed this romantic interlude Charmaine.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/7/2015 10:20:00 PM

And beautiful eyes they are, my dear. Your writes are full of longing and love...and beautiful imagery. Lovely write.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/7/2015 9:53:00 PM

Fabulous write Charmaine! wonderfully put up subtle emotions!

David Meade

Date: 1/7/2015 8:48:00 PM

Dreams are the lifeblood of our imaginations -- allow us to see the invisible, accomplish great things, but most importantly they allow us to be human -- to love and to explore the unknown. Lovely my dear Charma, 7

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/7/2015 7:15:00 PM

This is stunning Char. An excellent write some of the imagery is mind blowing. A Fav.

Tim Smith

Date: 1/7/2015 7:10:00 PM

So beautiful Charma..our dreams will not be taken...a favo(u)rite : ) ...... hugs Tim