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These Eyes

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/29/2015 6:06:00 PM
Hi Charmaine, I enjoyed reading this one again. I see you took my small suggestion. I hope this greeting finds you well.
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Date: 3/21/2015 12:12:00 AM
This is a good poem. Well done -JT
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Date: 3/4/2015 11:57:00 AM
Such a romantic,beautifully written poem. Your work is great!
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Date: 1/30/2015 1:03:00 AM
Great images, I enjoyed the magical flow of this piece !
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Date: 1/14/2015 10:14:00 AM
Howdy Charma! It has been awhile, and I must confess that I have missed reading your poems so I am glad that you reminded me to read a few. Prettier than ever I say.
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Date: 1/13/2015 2:57:00 AM
You're so strongly romantic Charma, you simply refuse to lose love, your heart so beautifully persistent to nurture fine passion. "Of dreams we are Belongers...Fearless on the verge of nothingness." That's fierce love Poetess...J.A.B.
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Date: 1/10/2015 3:01:00 PM
Super thoughts...God bless you my dear...One day you will touch the sky.
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Date: 1/9/2015 7:46:00 AM
Change impregnate to impregnates and your poem will be perfect. I really enjoyed this romantic interlude Charmaine.
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Date: 1/7/2015 10:20:00 PM
And beautiful eyes they are, my dear. Your writes are full of longing and love...and beautiful imagery. Lovely write.
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Date: 1/7/2015 9:53:00 PM
Fabulous write Charmaine! wonderfully put up subtle emotions!
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Date: 1/7/2015 8:48:00 PM
Dreams are the lifeblood of our imaginations -- allow us to see the invisible, accomplish great things, but most importantly they allow us to be human -- to love and to explore the unknown. Lovely my dear Charma, 7
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Date: 1/7/2015 7:27:00 PM
Just incredible.. Beautiful!!
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Date: 1/7/2015 7:15:00 PM
This is stunning Char. An excellent write some of the imagery is mind blowing. A Fav.
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Date: 1/7/2015 7:10:00 PM
So beautiful Charma..our dreams will not be taken...a favo(u)rite : ) ...... hugs Tim
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