These Eyes

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
June 29, 2015 at 6:06 PM
Hi Charmaine, I enjoyed reading this one again. I see you took my small suggestion. I hope this greeting finds you well.
J.T. Avatar
March 21, 2015 at 12:12 AM
This is a good poem. Well done -JT
Cannizzaro Avatar
March 4, 2015 at 11:57 AM
Such a romantic,beautifully written poem. Your work is great!
Gray Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 1:03 AM
Great images, I enjoyed the magical flow of this piece !
Zerbst Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 10:14 AM
Howdy Charma! It has been awhile, and I must confess that I have missed reading your poems so I am glad that you reminded me to read a few. Prettier than ever I say.
Bordner Avatar
January 13, 2015 at 2:57 AM
You're so strongly romantic Charma, you simply refuse to lose love, your heart so beautifully persistent to nurture fine passion. "Of dreams we are Belongers...Fearless on the verge of nothingness." That's fierce love Poetess...J.A.B.
Goswami Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 3:01 PM
Super thoughts...God bless you my dear...One day you will touch the sky.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 9, 2015 at 7:46 AM
Change impregnate to impregnates and your poem will be perfect. I really enjoyed this romantic interlude Charmaine.
Manassian Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 10:20 PM
And beautiful eyes they are, my dear. Your writes are full of longing and love...and beautiful imagery. Lovely write.
A. Sharma Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 9:53 PM
Fabulous write Charmaine! wonderfully put up subtle emotions!
Meade Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 8:48 PM
Dreams are the lifeblood of our imaginations -- allow us to see the invisible, accomplish great things, but most importantly they allow us to be human -- to love and to explore the unknown. Lovely my dear Charma, 7
Yvonne Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 7:15 PM
This is stunning Char. An excellent write some of the imagery is mind blowing. A Fav.
Smith Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 7:10 PM
So beautiful Charma..our dreams will not be taken...a favo(u)rite : ) ...... hugs Tim
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