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These Broken Dreams- Collaboration With Darren White:

If these broken dreams were meant to be, Then why is this world so hard to see? This world we live in is so obscene, If only we could live in a dream. Some say living in a dream is bad I always think that awfully sad For it's this world that's broken, not the dream We stand on its painful smithereens What is important is in your heart Not all in life wants you to be smart, Find your pack, find your path, find your rhyme That's what is important in your time When wondering if life is worthwhile, You’ll often find yourself with a smile. (Nine syllables per line)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/13/2017 2:13:00 PM
Great job once again to Soup's Poetic Dynamic Duo!!!!! Holy cool poem Batman!! Really nice guys.
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Darren White
Date: 1/13/2017 3:04:00 PM
Then I must be Robin :D... Thanks Chris !
Date: 1/13/2017 11:57:00 AM
Nothing wrong with dreaming in a broken world...love your vision here
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Darren White
Date: 1/13/2017 3:03:00 PM
Yeah, so do we, dreaming is important.
Date: 1/13/2017 7:51:00 AM
Very well said ... You love Sonnet very much ...
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