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There I've said it

Ah, there's something I must tell you and although I know it's late I simply have to say it 'Cause, I don't think it can wait I know you're sitting there In the dark and all alone Know I'ld rather, it in person Than like this, on the phone But the distance in-between us And the years that passed us by Have shown a light upon this subject And exposed an awful lie So when you see me, I'll be different Don't be mad, and please don't cry I'll always be your loving wife Although, I've changed into a guy

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Date: 7/3/2015 7:02:00 PM
Your poem brings a lump to me throat Jerry - Lindsay
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 7/3/2015 7:20:00 PM
I just hope that lump is benign Lindsay. Relax mate I just wrote it for the contest.
Date: 7/3/2015 6:41:00 PM
Ah come on Jerry . . . Say it ain't so!! I always knew there was something special about you!! (HA HA!!) Enjoyed your write here very much. Quite Clever and Quite Jerry in every respect. A "7" Sir!! Best Wishes, Gary (P.S. Is there a name change as well??)
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 7/3/2015 7:17:00 PM
Wow Gary, if you believe that one, I'm also a hansom 29yr old Billionaire and for a small fee can share with you how to become young and rich yourself......good looking cost extra , LOL Thank For the comment my friend.
Date: 7/3/2015 4:35:00 PM
OH DEAR!!! I never EVER expected that ending, Jerry. There go my chances up in smoke. Very clever write. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/3/2015 4:12:00 PM
Very imaginative and skillfully constructed. You use good imagery and maintain a poetic flow throughout the whole piece. Emile.
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 7/3/2015 5:25:00 PM
Thank you Emile, I confess, I didn't imagen this, I just went with the Flow
Date: 7/3/2015 4:00:00 PM
Welcome to the soup Geraldine : )
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 7/3/2015 4:05:00 PM
Thanks Timmy lol
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Jerry T Curtis
Date: 7/3/2015 4:05:00 PM
Again !