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... The thought......the idea ................................. ................................. ................................. The finished product

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Date: 2/16/2010 8:12:00 AM
great imagery in these few lines i think the ...........is the way i actually think (lol) the poem was great though simple and powerful at the same time i loved it!=)jo p.s. do you think it's crazy that your 7 words inspired a comment over 30 words long=)
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Date: 2/11/2010 4:44:00 PM
Excellent lines Sara... great imagism for the reader to contemplate.. appreciate your special comments on my poetry today.. digging out from 48 total inches of snow in one week.. more expected on Sunday... HELP! luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/10/2010 12:29:00 PM
Kool Imagism Sara >> James
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Date: 2/10/2010 8:06:00 AM
You make it sound so easy Sara.Rgds Brian
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Date: 2/10/2010 6:23:00 AM
Sara, And there is so much in between! Good job. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/9/2010 5:59:00 AM
The blank with dots tells a lot many things which your beautiful Poem has left untold. It’s a great message. I remember when it was a state of emergency in India and Press was not allowed to write any thing 1977, one News Paper started its editorial by writing Emergency in Action and left the whole editorial blank. Blank had told every thing. It’s a great idea you have given in your simple poem. Beautiful. Thanks & Many thanks for your precious comments on my poem. Best wishes & love Ravindra
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Date: 2/8/2010 10:28:00 PM
Amen, Must have been the way God started it all, Sara. Sincerely, love, Moses
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Date: 2/8/2010 6:01:00 PM
theres no telling what great ideas go through the writers mind! lol. we just don't know, even the writers themselves.it just comes from no where. -Always Lynette
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Date: 2/8/2010 3:13:00 PM
I am so happy your poetry was amongst the poetry I am reading today Sara. May you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/8/2010 1:29:00 PM
another good one, hope you will keep sharing very inspirational.
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Date: 2/8/2010 1:29:00 PM
mom, you have 849 poems, wow
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Date: 2/8/2010 6:34:00 AM
Just a few short words and this says it all...good write..Danny
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Date: 2/8/2010 5:19:00 AM
OH YES Sara.. how true and good luck if this is your entry as its a blockbuster ... and a sure winner... the middle line can be filled in with many words for us poets, yes?... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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