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The Wound In My Heart

She said our relationship needs 'time apart' ~ yet time cannot dress the wound in my heart

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/8/2022 9:59:00 PM

Sad, how different prespective can sometimes be opposites. The seeds of pain are planted. Have a blessed weekend, my friend. Bill

Valsa George

Date: 10/7/2022 9:42:00 PM

I feel for you my friend. Love can be so hurting sometimes. But with a little adjustment from our side and help from above, everything can be patched up. Best Wishes!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/8/2022 7:48:00 PM

Ha, ha. You are now a relationship advisor, I see. Thanks, Valsa.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/6/2022 6:32:00 PM

That is so true, gw. There are some things that time simply cannot heal.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2022 7:02:00 PM

Actually, 'he' should turn for healing to the One Above, the Consummate Healer! What say you?!

Michael Tor

Date: 10/6/2022 2:24:00 PM

Heartfelt piece my friend. Love has a way of wounding us...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2022 7:13:00 PM

I guess that those who are closest to us can hurt us the most...

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/6/2022 2:12:00 PM

great poem, gershon! hope it's fictional...

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2022 7:15:00 PM

This actually happened to me decades ago. Almost seems unreal or surreal at this point. Thanks, Ilene!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/6/2022 9:55:00 AM

Hi Gershon I feel sad for you my friend guess we have all become like an extended family on this poetry site. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Sally Eslinger

Date: 10/6/2022 7:34:00 AM

Oh, Gershon! Just as a picture can say a thousand words, this couplet goes miles deep into the emotional experiences that most of us have had to endure. I love the elegantly stated brevity and the move of the “twist” from line one to two. Bravo!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2022 7:46:00 AM

Your kind, encouraging words go straight to my heart, Sally. Thank you so much your uplifting comments. Much appreciated, Gershon

Becky Forbes

Date: 10/6/2022 7:10:00 AM

sad :-(

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2022 7:17:00 PM

Life isn't always a bowl of cherries... sometimes it's the pits... but not for long! ~ Jack-in-the-Box

Terry Miller

Date: 10/6/2022 5:19:00 AM

Well said, my friend!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2022 7:22:00 PM

Thank you, Terry! Hope and Light, Gershon

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2022 3:31:00 AM

Ahhhh!! So sad. I had an aunt that her husband was in the coastguard said, " Absence makes the heart grow fonder." Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2022 7:24:00 PM

Always a pleasure, Sara -- the pleasure, all mine. Thanks, gw

Deb M

Date: 10/5/2022 10:23:00 PM

Oh bless you big bad that is the sweetest touching little poem! Lovely! Debx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 10/6/2022 7:08:00 PM

Glad you like this 'sweet one,' Deb. Sunshine and Sunflowers, Gershon