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The Wonder of Light

Light—how amazing it is, whether it moves at a mind-boggling speed and literally shines upon the Earth or glows within me and makes clear the path I should take! Both lights were made by God. April 19, 2021 Contest: Liberum Divisa 5 Sponsor: Gregory R. Barden October 30, 2021 entered in the Bite-Size Poem no. 25 Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Date: 11/9/2021 8:15:00 AM
Dear Janice, your tender, thought-provoking poem is beautiful. Your contemplation shines. Congratulations for your excellent win in Line's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/8/2021 12:08:00 AM
Great reflection on the concept of light. Inner as well as external lights are compared. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/7/2021 2:01:00 PM
Delightful! Congrats on a win!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/7/2021 4:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Karen. Janice
Date: 11/7/2021 12:52:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Janice. Suggestion: consider removing 'were' in the last line.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/7/2021 4:10:00 PM
Line, thank you for my HM. Removing "were" would create a fragment. ("Made"--as I have used it--requires an auxiliary verb.) Janice
Date: 4/27/2021 7:38:00 PM
so enjoyable, this is beautiful
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 11/7/2021 4:08:00 PM
Thanks so much, Funom. Janice
Date: 4/20/2021 2:31:00 PM
Nice job; -JT
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/22/2021 5:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, JT. Janice
Date: 4/20/2021 7:54:00 AM
A stanza that stands alone, indeed he created the light to lead us out of the darkness. Good luck in the contest Janice. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/22/2021 5:13:00 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. You are very kind! Janice
Date: 4/20/2021 5:55:00 AM
Beautiful, Janice ~
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/22/2021 5:13:00 PM
Thanks so much, Line. Janice
Date: 4/19/2021 7:15:00 PM
A beautiful sentiment!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/22/2021 5:14:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. Janice

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