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The Wishing Tree

I wish I may, I wish I might, make a wish on my wishing tree tonight. A child’s rhyme, to keep close, my sounds. Mental battles fought.........many days Some times are “ups” but mostly “Down’s” This rhyme I clutch to me and hold so dear My wishing tree standing close.... always there giving presence of thought, holding back fear. What does it look like...this tree of mine? I don’t know, I can’t quite see its shape. Warm and fuzzy? Loving? Color blind? A long time ago my Mother gave it to me. I’m gone. I mean now I’m truly happy. I live here, and John. This is our place to be. Well, I do have a place to go.....my work. I work at a grocery store. I put things in bags. They call me a clerk. I don’t make much money at the store. But, I get money from DSS It comes on the 15th, You know what it’s for? With a coupon I get a milkshake for free. Then I buy a big mac, a Play Boy magazine. Then I wish for more milkshakes from my tree. Inspired by a young man with Down’s who attended our church. Supervised by DSS, he lived in an apartment with a room mate and worked at various places as above. © Apr 25 2010 Charles Henderson

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Date: 8/17/2010 6:41:00 AM
Just stopping by to remind you of my newest contest The Birds And The Bees. I hope you will enter the contest if you haven't already Charles. Thank you if you have already entered or plan on entering. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2010 6:47:00 AM
Many congratulations Charles on your win in Carol's fine contest with this gem >> James
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:22:00 PM
Congrats on this well deserved win, Charles
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Date: 8/5/2010 5:10:00 PM
I read your poem through until I realized you were speaking of a boy with Downs. Then I read it agian with appreciation. Very nice. Congratulations on your placement. I would have put it higher. You did such an understanding piece. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/5/2010 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations, Charles, on this winner circle write. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:27:00 PM
Congrats Charles on your winning poem in Carol's contest with this excellent write and win.. enjoy another momentous victory today my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/5/2010 1:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest Charles. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2010 4:07:00 AM
enjoyed your write today...
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Date: 8/3/2010 3:07:00 AM
Nasty disease but a wonderful write, excellent tribute to those who suffer. Nice tribute to the young man in your dedication.
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Date: 8/3/2010 1:40:00 AM
Well done Charles, nice dedication enjoyed,,.p.d.
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