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The Winter Storm

Arctic opens giant mouth
Blows chilled breath
Across the frozen tundra
Down, down across state after state
Heading south, southeast dipping deep

Poet sits with chilled ankles and feet
By the glow of her computer moon
North winds whip naked oaks
Uninvited breeze enters seemingly safe room

Heat pump's silence exacerbates 
Wind gust's lifting of the roof
Stirring of the wind chimes
Their hollow sound being driven 
Into a voice of frenzy

A thinning, gray headed man snores 
Heat pump clicks on
Temporary relief for chilled feet
As the poet tries to visualize 

Those oaks that get no relief 
Except when gusts slow
Oaks' dead brown leaves are tossed 
Dried, crinkled left 'pon the cold earth
As a temporary blanket of warmth

Strong gusts break weakened limbs
Their occasional crash frightens
Any leaf left hanging by a brittle stem gives way 
To the breath blown from the arctic's giant mouth  

Date written: 12-23-2022
Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12-23-2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kerr Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 10:43 AM
I feel transported to the very visual vivid scenes of your in-depth description. The vulnerability of those who are exposed to such weather events are admirably conveyed. Superb writing, Sara. Heartfelt thanks for reading my prose piece Somewhere On Foot. Howard
Kendrick Avatar
November 21, 2025 at 11:47 AM
I appreciate the high praise of my work. I hardly remember writing this one because it was so long ago. So much has happened since then. I am glad you could feel the descriptive lines. Sara K
George Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 7:34 AM
Beautifully done, Sara. The might of the frosty wind can be deeply felt from your poem. A great entry for the contest. All the Best dear poet friend !
Kendrick Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 7:52 AM
Thank you, Valsa. I appreciate the kind review. Sara
Pandit Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 5:27 AM
Winter is gushing most everywhere in the US right now. I know you are feeling it from the images you convey. Stay safe, Sara. Happy Holidays!
Kendrick Avatar
December 23, 2022 at 7:06 AM
Thank you, Vijay. I hope this is a great Christmas season for you and yours as well. Your visit is uplifting. Sara
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