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The Winter Cemetery

Powder from heaven falls. Frail shadows loom on cemetery walls. We walk without a word when a lone winter bird in the stillness is heard. Caw-caw-caw, to the west of us it calls. Toward the sound we go past tree limbs hanging low -heavy with snow. We watch along our way how in the wind they sway, for the breeze seems to play a macabre tune to the cawing crow. There it is to the west! Scarring clean white, we tread the small hill’s crest. How sad it is – how wrong his body should belong here where no lark’s glad song is heard. Instead, a crow for the unblessed! With this place now abloom with fresh snow, shadows thicken in the gloom. How mournful is wind’s moan as I speak to his stone - “Dear brother, all alone, why is winter’s cemetery your doom?” Written Jan. 6, 2018 for Broken Wing's "Rhyme Me a Poem" Contest

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Date: 3/12/2018 5:44:00 PM
Such a beautifully sad atmospheric poem conveys a bleak vision perfectly.
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Date: 2/27/2018 12:43:00 PM
Definitely deserving a win here ... this was one of my favorites of yours!! Congratulations Andrea! Best, Judy
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Date: 2/24/2018 6:38:00 PM
Returning with congratulations Andrea, for your second place win with this beautifully sad poem..
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Date: 2/24/2018 4:33:00 PM
Back with more congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 2/24/2018 2:37:00 PM
This poem is a real beauty Andrea and deserves to have a high placement! Congratulations on your second placement. I love this beautiful poem! : )
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Date: 2/24/2018 1:43:00 PM
Wonderful imagery and rhymes , congrats Andrea on a fine win!
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Date: 1/29/2018 1:09:00 PM
I found your poem! It really is similar to my Rondeau, isn't it? I got the inspiration by seeing a b/w photo of a graveyard with snow-covered head stones. Maybe this is the type of poem the poets gravitate toward. Yours is a lot more accessible than mine. More down to earth. It is sad and beautiful.
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Date: 1/26/2018 10:03:00 PM
Wow! Hauntingly beautiful. The use of language is superb. Gorgeous writing!
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Date: 1/19/2018 11:56:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Andrea, the imagery and descriptive detail is extraordinary - blessings and keep up the wonderful work! :-) <3
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Date: 1/18/2018 12:10:00 PM
So happy to see this in the winner's list in this contest as well!! Congratulations dear Andrea! This is really a very beautiful poem! ~Judy
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Date: 1/17/2018 7:33:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/17/2018 3:46:00 PM
Hello Lovely Andrea, thank you for entering my recent contest. Congratulations on your Awesome win. <3 SKAT
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Date: 1/14/2018 7:33:00 PM
I knew I would see you in the winner's list with the amazing write Andrea!! Really loved this one!! Congrats! ~Judy
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Date: 1/12/2018 8:22:00 AM
An excellent piece Andrea. Congrats.
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Date: 1/12/2018 8:04:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this emotional write, I know well this sad feeling one gets at the cemetery. Well done! And best of luck in the next contest.
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Date: 1/12/2018 6:18:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Andrea
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Date: 1/12/2018 5:31:00 AM
beautiful poem sweet Andrea, congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 1/11/2018 11:06:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Andrea. Well written.
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Date: 1/11/2018 10:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Andrea, so very sad , but beautiful.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/9/2018 8:11:00 PM
I love how this poem is centered around the crow. Crows tend to be loud, intrusive birds, unafraid to make themselves known in the quietest of spots. The first lines too set up a clear picture in my head. "powder from heaven" is a unique way to describe the snow. Certainly impressive. Always, Laura
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Date: 1/9/2018 9:09:00 AM
Excellent poem, just what Constance would love, Andrea:)
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Date: 1/8/2018 9:03:00 PM
An awesome heartfelt emotive write Andrea~Best wishes for a win!~Che :)
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Date: 1/8/2018 6:50:00 PM
Wow, such a heartfelt write Andrea... You captured the emotions and the scenery very well...
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Date: 1/7/2018 8:45:00 PM
Andrea, your write is awesome. Beautifully colored with melancholy imagery within your lovely poetic lines. I was enthralled throughout.. Your poem is captivating, intimate and moving. Best wishes for a win. Warmest wishes to you.. ~Susan
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Date: 1/7/2018 4:01:00 PM
This is a beautiful story wrapped into your lovely rhyme, Andrea! GL in the contest :)
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