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The Wild Man

barely audible
echoes of my existence
imitate reason

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/25/2013 4:37:00 PM
very well done.... Congratulations....Jake
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Date: 6/25/2013 1:48:00 PM
James, congrats on your win with this excellent senryu! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/25/2013 11:04:00 AM
A great Senryu here James!Congrats on the win.
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Date: 6/25/2013 6:36:00 AM
James congratulations on your suburb Senryu. A well deserve win my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/24/2013 11:22:00 PM
COOL one!!! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 11/12/2009 4:28:00 PM
most excellent I'd like to see you "wild" ;) Light & Love Jimbo
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Date: 11/8/2009 2:23:00 AM
Great: Echoes of my existence imitate reason! Thanks for your comment on Atacama, James. Hope you have a nice weekend...Gert
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Date: 11/8/2009 12:11:00 AM
original and good write really liked the title good work
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Date: 11/7/2009 3:32:00 PM
Clever choice of words, Jim, and well written too... enjoyed.. thankxxx for sharing .. Linda-Marie, Poetess Extraordinaire" and Poetry Soup "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/7/2009 7:15:00 AM
I like this Jim thank you for your kind words and comments today.rgds Brian
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Date: 11/6/2009 4:12:00 PM
Super Senyru James >> clever write >> James
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Date: 11/6/2009 3:46:00 PM
Interesting ideas put to the flowing pen. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/6/2009 3:09:00 PM
I love the wild man in you JIM--lol--smile--Charma
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Date: 11/6/2009 11:28:00 AM
Haaaaaaaaaaaaa! Masterfully witty, my man, sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/6/2009 9:04:00 AM
Wow! Elusively aware James. A compelling Senryu. Love poetry that makes one sit and ponder for themselves. Thanks for sharing, smile. Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/6/2009 6:07:00 AM
VERY PROFOUND SENRY, MY FRIEND. THANK YOU FOR SHARING AND THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND COMMENTS. LOVE, LAINIE
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Date: 11/6/2009 3:09:00 AM
Quite compelling, Jim! I feel this way sometimes too. Nice to see you posting new work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/5/2009 9:54:00 PM
Very nice...enjoyed...Marty
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