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THE WHISPERS OF AUTUMN

I love when the hot summer days melt away, autumn will be here real soon. A change is coming says the big blue jay, I can see it in the moon.
Days are now getting shorter, as the days play hide-in-seek. The moon told about it the last quarter, this is the cooling off week.
Pretty colors are everywhere, I love seeing yellow, orange and red. The falling leaves have a real flair, picking them up is a real dread.
Autumn I love the cooler days and nights, you bring wonderful new delights.

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Date: 10/6/2024 3:58:00 PM
I think autumn is my favorite season, especially after reading your poem with such beautiful imagery. It gives us so many things to write about doesn't it? Your poem would be a nice one to illustrate, it is so pretty!
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Date: 8/31/2024 8:47:00 PM
Beautiful poem dear Paula. I love autumn with its magical colors. Also love the cooler nights and days. Autumn is a season that brings new new delights. A great entry. All the Best, dear Paula. Love and hugs.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/1/2024 9:53:00 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "THE WHISPERS OF AUTUMN" write to be a Beautiful poem. Oh yes, with the pretty magical colors everywhere. I love the cooler weather. I cannot wait. Hooray!!! Have a wonderful day...................
Date: 8/30/2024 1:27:00 PM
I am looking forward to Autumn and the cooler days. The changing colours and scenery are beautiful. Enjoyed your poem very much Paula. Emilia : )
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/31/2024 8:51:00 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "THE WHISPERS OF AUTUMN" write. AUTUMN is the best time of the year with pretty colors/cooler weather. I cannot wait. Hooray!!!  Have a wonderful day...................
Date: 8/30/2024 10:46:00 AM
Lovely tribute to fall, Paula. Janice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/30/2024 10:56:00 AM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "THE WHISPERS OF AUTUMN" write to be a Lovely tribute to fall. I love fall. It is the best time of the year for me. Have a wonderful day...................
Date: 8/29/2024 11:56:00 AM
I love how you have described all the hints of Autumn, Paula It flows beautifully. SuZ
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/29/2024 12:52:00 PM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "THE WHISPERS OF AUTUMN" write. Yes, AUTUMN is the best time of the year. I cannot wait for cooler weather. Hooray!!!  Have a wonderful day...................
Date: 8/28/2024 4:31:00 PM
The joy of autumn is well evoked by this beautiful poem, Paula. Thank you for sharing. :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/29/2024 12:51:00 PM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "THE WHISPERS OF AUTUMN" write. Oh yes, AUTUMN is the best time of the year. Hooray!!! I cannot wait for cooler weather..... Have a wonderful day...................
Date: 8/28/2024 3:43:00 PM
Summer this year has been all over the place, hot, cold, wet, dry, windy, you name it we’ve had it. So I’m with you on this one, Paula. Roll on autumn! Enjoyed.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/29/2024 12:50:00 PM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "THE WHISPERS OF AUTUMN" write. It has been just hot/hot/then hot. We really need rain. If you have any extra, send it this way. Hahaha!!! Oh yes, AUTUMN is the best time of the year. Hooray!!! Have a wonderful day...................
Date: 8/27/2024 2:30:00 AM
Lovely whispers of autumn Paula, a wonderful time of the year… Beryl
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2024 12:34:00 PM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "THE WHISPERS OF AUTUMN" write. Oh yes, AUTUMN is the best time of the year. Hooray!!! Have a wonderful day...................
Date: 8/26/2024 12:10:00 PM
I am looking forward to autumn settling in and staying. I enjoy fall and spring except for the problems with allergies. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2024 12:32:00 PM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "THE WHISPERS OF AUTUMN" write. I am also looking forward to autumn with cooler weather. Have a wonderful day...................
Date: 8/26/2024 12:04:00 PM
Lovely rhymes in your sonnet.. it flows so well..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2024 12:30:00 PM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you found my fun "THE WHISPERS OF AUTUMN" write to have Lovely rhymes/flows so well. Thanks for your very kind words. My heart is smiling.... Have a wonderful day...................
Date: 8/26/2024 11:22:00 AM
“I love when the hot summer days melt away, autumn will be here real soon. A change is coming says the big blue jay, I can see it in the moon” This poem from my favorite starting lines to the end engages us in the beauty of fall! Well done!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/27/2024 12:28:00 PM
Good to see you. Thanks for your note. Glad you enjoyed my fun "THE WHISPERS OF AUTUMN" write. Have a wonderful day...................
Date: 8/26/2024 9:07:00 AM
THE WHISPERS OF AUTUMN ~ Date Written:8/26/2024
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