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Thought I'd read your new oldest, LOL. Remember this one - enjoyed it as much on the second reading : ) Can't remember if I sent you congrats or not - it must be my age, LOL - many congrats on all your wins : )

LOL I love this one - hilarious. Many congrats on both your wins, Andrea : )

awwh, blue but bright, andie.. big heap of cheers for the big time win! :) huggs

Oh sad indeed. I can so picture this Andrea. Many congrats for this win luv.

Oh! something so unusual and unexpected..What if the bride wasn't like the mother,hmmm hope this turned out to be the groom's greatst loss!! how I'd love that :)) Congratulations Andrea on your fabulous win, brilliant dodoitsu here....enjoy your win dear...

Excellent entry Andrea, congratulations on taking Third place. Agape, Moses

a very sad one Andie, good unique take on the topic. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

So glad that the groom was wise enough to see the signs...saved from a lifetime of misery. Wish I would have seen signs... Great winning piece full of WISDOM! Appreciate reading this poem. Gwendolen

This was so funny, Andrea. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Congrats Andrea on another amazing win in Wedding Rehearsal contest with this dynamic poem my friend.. another treasure to enjoy for your excellent quality of writing luv..

How painfully true this is....well deserved win! Love it!

Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Congratulations on the third place win in my contest, Andrea

It's a winner. great cohesiveness of story line.

very nicely put. makes you really think about getting married

Thanks for your entry, Andrea

Well always better to know before hand Andrea so to save grief down the road.. great lines to convey this thought.. and a wedding rehearsal unexpected luv.. good luck in the contest..

Interesting, feminine mystique revealed. The groom senses the reticence of the father-in-law, and has a change of heart. Most men are egotistical enough not to place to much emphasis on the feelings of their father-in-law to be. A nice, unique view!

Oh my goodness, maybe it wasn't such a good thing to have that rehearsal hey.. Really enjoyed your approach to the contest Andrea.. Good luck to you ;) love Wilma

I have always said that 'eyes' speek volumes. I think the groom-to-be, thought as I do. Good one, Andrea. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Lainie

That was great revelation..Sad one though...Good luck in the contest with this creative work..Thanks for the kind review of my work..I am saying that my poems are some that I jotted down here and there on whatever..I am saying that Janet Frame's mother said that the best poems written are jotted down written on scraps of paper, in places where we never expect to get a poem.. Sara

Now that was just too funny. I loved this Dodoitsu of yours. Makes me want to go and try this artform again. Thanks for sharing.

I just wished my kids would have had a wedding, they all were married in a court room by a judge. this was a great piece and reminds me of that steve martin movie, "Father of the Bride" part one and two. Thank you for commenting on Beetle Sees Daylight. I love all nature and its little creatures as well, they touch my heart and inspire me.

Meeting the parents can spell doom at a wedding rehearsal, Andrea. Very clever. Bet this has happened a lot of times! Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest. Love, carolyn

LOL - love it : ) I knew your muse would whisper something good in your ear! Hmmmm, I've never met Sue's family - and we've been together for 19 years (married for 6 of those years...)