The Weaver

T’was flair from the cobbles that drove the loom
with forced hardy sweat they laboured till eve
a family tradition from the womb
with threaded shuttle and reed hook they weave.
The warp the weft that nurtured the blending
the clatter the din the need of lip sync
a marriage of yarns a pattern pending
the huff and the puff with no time to blink.
This place the cornerstone belonged one’s life
town mill chimneys stretching into the clouds
the smog the fog to cut through with a knife
one pence to pay if late due to the crowds.
While in the countryside the manor house
no longer ‘His Grace’ but master with nous.

© Harry J Horsman 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Moore Avatar
October 27, 2018 at 7:20 PM
Thank you Harry for the fine example of the sonnet.
Lindley Avatar
October 9, 2018 at 8:31 AM
I am back again to read this wonderfully crafted sonnet. As noted before this is a gem and should be read often. Such depth, quality and great insight held within..
Laurie Avatar
October 3, 2018 at 6:12 PM
G'day harry … a classic sonnet harry, and oh, haven't times changed - thanks harry - Lindsay
Macdonald Avatar
August 10, 2018 at 1:01 AM
Nicely written :) I really enjoyed the imagery . Beautiful
Kendrick Avatar
July 31, 2018 at 8:48 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Way to go. Sara
Dietrich Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 7:09 PM
Just came back to say hi and thanks for your comment. Sure hope this one places (and that mine does too. haha)
Sheehan Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 12:44 PM
Excellent Sonnet. Fantastic imagery. It has a great flow.
Horne Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 10:41 AM
excellent sonnet, Harry
Lindley Avatar
July 26, 2018 at 5:22 AM
Bravo! Now this is a great sonnet. A true pleasure to read and learn from my good friend! A fav...
Sergi Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 8:14 AM
Hi Harry : May I say that I was definitely in awe of this poem. It senses a classic prose from the old bards. My compliments!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 25, 2018 at 3:30 AM
I love this sonnet harry xx
Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 5:53 PM
I do believe it IS your best sonnet, Harry. Love how you portrayed this place!
Stebbings Avatar
July 24, 2018 at 2:06 PM
Interesting and original theme, Harry. I like the narrative and imagery in this sonnet. Good luck in the contest. // Barry
Rose  Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 5:37 PM
You got a language all of your own here, well done, its a classy poem Harry
Onclaud Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 11:31 AM
enjoyed the renaissance feel of this sonnet, harry... lovely story!...huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 9:52 AM
I love the mood of this piece Harry. I’m glad I dropped by.
Warrior Avatar
July 23, 2018 at 8:46 AM
You have weaved a great sonnet my friend...enjoyed...^WW^
Messina Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 9:31 PM
Just wonderful, Harry! Great imagery, great sonnet!
Gentry Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 5:19 AM
Wonderful imagery all thru this sonnet. Your words sre phrased perfectly to me. I like 'the huff the puff with no time to think'. Well done! :)
Wigley Avatar
July 22, 2018 at 1:35 AM
Excellent sonnet, Harry, sums up the sweat and graft so well. We have Richard Arkwright's MAsson Mill museum at Cromford up the road, and a walk round there brings it all to life. Hard times. Regards, Viv
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 11:53 PM
Your poem is graced with stunning imagery and divine lexicon Harry! Wish I had more time in my day to read and comment. School is out and I watch my six yr. old granddaughter thru summer. I loved this beauty my friend! : )
Pandit Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 6:05 PM
Words wonderfully illustrate the imagery in your poem..excellent details...enjoyed reading your poem, Harry.
Melugin Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 5:39 PM
Harry, you weave poetry into our souls!
Turner Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 3:54 PM
Painting from memory serves you well Harry. I can see the chimneys billowing smoke turning the sky grey as i read. I enjoyed this immensely:)
Cunningham Avatar
July 21, 2018 at 3:53 PM
Beautiful sonnet Harry, love the imagery of bygone days. Tom
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