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I stand- gazing at the weathered door- beautiful the knob is old brass foliage dark and green protects it an assemblage of butterflies lilt and move musically all about fluttering and it's lovely at the weathered door beautiful and I look behind me at the whispering foliage dark and green a labyrinthine of twisting memories a long path strewn with tears woebegone and sorrowful is my journey as I gaze at the weathered door- beautiful and the knob of old brass beckoning from foliage dark and green that protects and I step forward to open but tangled vines cling to me- around my legs and arms holding me back and butterflies lilt and flutter musically a beautiful assemblage encouraging and the past is whispering and hissing surreptitious of a manuscript written where I languor listlessly and weary oh the murmuring memories that hold me locked in the past my journey to the door a struggle but oh I love them the memories each one weeping I must break free of the tangled vines of the past so I take each beautiful tendril off each clinging vine and lay them gently on the ground with a kiss and step forward frightened and quivering placing my hand on the old brass knob and I open that door the weathered door beautiful protected by foliage dark and green and step through that assemblage of butterflies flutter musically through the opening to a lush and green sumptuous beginning and I follow them into a future mellifluous ________________________ June 18, 2015 Free Verse Written for the contest, ...And then I opened THAT door. sponsor, John Lawless First Place

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Date: 6/26/2015 9:13:00 AM
Dear Broken Wings, What an absolutely beautiful poem...I just loved every line! Congratulations on your win... Angie (John's wife)
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Date: 6/26/2015 8:15:00 AM
A beautifully executed metaphor-- like the best, it draws one in, deeper and deeper-- i loved it--len carber
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Date: 6/25/2015 11:16:00 PM
Hi Broken, this is a wonderful win. WUV **SKAT**
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Date: 6/25/2015 10:41:00 PM
Broken, congratulations on your win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 6/25/2015 9:55:00 PM
Please, Miss- can I have a mellifluous future, too? Lovely verse, and a worthy win, BW. Jolly well done, young Lady. Viv x
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Date: 6/25/2015 9:00:00 PM
OH MY GOSH this is a rare beauty indeed, Constance. VERY VERY good!!! Superb! And congrats.
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Date: 6/25/2015 8:46:00 PM
Wow, great job, congrats!
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Date: 6/25/2015 7:45:00 PM
...foliage dark and green that protects.... YOU WIN THE DOOR PRIZE...GREAT JOB WITH THE POEM AND THE THEME. Thanks for participating in the contest.
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Date: 6/19/2015 12:08:00 PM
Wonderful imagery and depth to this piece. Your thoughts come alive and breathe within your words. An absolute delight to read with a mystical flowing cadence that welcomes the experience. Emile. #7
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Date: 6/19/2015 9:52:00 AM
The weight and depth of this is amazing, and it sucks me into the story with rapture.. Well done,,, Cheers! KATTZCRADLE
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Date: 6/19/2015 9:51:00 AM
This is enrapturing, and intriguing, sucks me into the body of the story!! Well Done with SOUL! :--) Cheers,,, KATTZCRADLE...
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Date: 6/19/2015 8:34:00 AM
to use metaphors in such haunting, weaving manner to express your winding thoughts is so like you, constance... how beautiful!
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Date: 6/19/2015 2:03:00 AM
BRILLIANT! Constance, this is one of your best. I was drawn in by the emotion felt within your lines, stepping into that beautiful future with hesitation, because often memories hold us up, but may also hold us back. You conveyed this brilliantly in your passionate and engaging poem. Brava my friend. I hope to see this at the top of the winner's list. It is simply beautiful! A fave for me. 7
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