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The Waves Echo

out in space your roar hovers
far more then an echo from below
Do you spin the winds too?
juggle planets on your frothy crest
the cacophony
of your curling ribbon
rolling from edge to edge
Are stars amassed in a similar dream?
a bright band of white sprinkles
showering the milky way
a quiet mirror of their reflections
skipping secrets like teenage passions
Are we cocooned in your silvery castle?
moonlight kissing the starlight
behind the curtain of nights twilight canvas
waves voice venerates heavens’ door


9-5-2020
Brian's Choice 4 contest
1st place

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Gary Radice Date: 9/7/2020 1:53:00 AM Love this Jeanne. For fear of sounding pretentious here (I enjoy art but am no expert) I'm reminded of Rothko: both in how you express your emotions and feelings through words and your lovely photography. Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/7/2020 4:47:00 AM Hi Gary...you hit it perfect as a home run! I do style my images after Rothko. That is so amazing that you felt his influence. He is one of my biggest influences for my work. Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and comment. :D

Gershon Wolf Date: 9/6/2020 8:29:00 PM I really like the way you framed this beautiful poem with three piercing questions. Penetrating poesy, Jeanne! Joy and Jubilation Gershon Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/7/2020 4:53:00 AM Joy and Jubilation! what a wonderful feeling that gives me. Keep up the great writing Gershon and thanks for the comments. :B

Joyce Johnson Date: 9/6/2020 5:46:00 PM Very descriptive. Congratulations on the win. Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/6/2020 7:01:00 PM Hi Joyce, thank you. That is kind of you to stop and comment. Blessings to you.

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 9/6/2020 5:04:00 PM Congratulations Jeanne! Linda Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/6/2020 7:01:00 PM Thank you Linda.

Bryan Norton Date: 9/6/2020 4:34:00 PM Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your placement. You have such a wonderful talent. Keep it up. Bryan Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/6/2020 7:01:00 PM Hi Bryan...thanks so much for the encouragement. :D

Brenda Chiri Date: 9/6/2020 4:21:00 PM Congrats on your top win!:) Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/6/2020 7:02:00 PM Hi Brenda, thanks so much.

John Watt Date: 9/5/2020 8:02:00 PM Jeanne, welcome back! Loved this write of yours with delightful celestial imagery mixed in with wind and wave. Beautiful impressionistic photography, yet again. Is this a new work? Login to Reply John Watt Date: 9/7/2020 11:59:00 PM Wish you all the best in your gallery opening. Must be a lot of work! Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/6/2020 5:18:00 AM Good Morning John...I believe this is one of my images from last year...I've been working on getting some ready for print for the gallery set to open in November.

Sand Blown Date: 9/5/2020 6:58:00 PM ...nice write....it was a reminder of an oldt song 'my echo my shadow and me, three' .....stan sand Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 9/6/2020 5:17:00 AM Hey Stan...it sounds like a good song! :D