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The Waves Echo

out in space your roar hovers far more then an echo from below Do you spin the winds too? juggle planets on your frothy crest the cacophony of your curling ribbon rolling from edge to edge Are stars amassed in a similar dream? a bright band of white sprinkles showering the milky way a quiet mirror of their reflections skipping secrets like teenage passions Are we cocooned in your silvery castle? moonlight kissing the starlight behind the curtain of nights twilight canvas waves voice venerates heavens’ door 9-5-2020 Brian's Choice 4 contest 1st place

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Gary Radice

Date: 9/7/2020 1:53:00 AM

Love this Jeanne. For fear of sounding pretentious here (I enjoy art but am no expert) I'm reminded of Rothko: both in how you express your emotions and feelings through words and your lovely photography.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/7/2020 4:47:00 AM

Hi Gary...you hit it perfect as a home run! I do style my images after Rothko. That is so amazing that you felt his influence. He is one of my biggest influences for my work. Thank you so much for taking the time to stop by and comment. :D

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/6/2020 8:29:00 PM

I really like the way you framed this beautiful poem with three piercing questions. Penetrating poesy, Jeanne! Joy and Jubilation Gershon

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/7/2020 4:53:00 AM

Joy and Jubilation! what a wonderful feeling that gives me. Keep up the great writing Gershon and thanks for the comments. :B

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/6/2020 5:46:00 PM

Very descriptive. Congratulations on the win.

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2020 7:01:00 PM

Hi Joyce, thank you. That is kind of you to stop and comment. Blessings to you.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/6/2020 5:04:00 PM

Congratulations Jeanne! Linda

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2020 7:01:00 PM

Thank you Linda.

Bryan Norton

Date: 9/6/2020 4:34:00 PM

Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your placement. You have such a wonderful talent. Keep it up. Bryan

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2020 7:01:00 PM

Hi Bryan...thanks so much for the encouragement. :D

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/6/2020 4:21:00 PM

Congrats on your top win!:)

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2020 7:02:00 PM

Hi Brenda, thanks so much.

John Watt

Date: 9/5/2020 8:02:00 PM

Jeanne, welcome back! Loved this write of yours with delightful celestial imagery mixed in with wind and wave. Beautiful impressionistic photography, yet again. Is this a new work?

John Watt
Date: 9/7/2020 11:59:00 PM

Wish you all the best in your gallery opening. Must be a lot of work!

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2020 5:18:00 AM

Good Morning John...I believe this is one of my images from last year...I've been working on getting some ready for print for the gallery set to open in November.

Sand Blown

Date: 9/5/2020 6:58:00 PM

...nice write....it was a reminder of an oldt song 'my echo my shadow and me, three' .....stan sand

Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/6/2020 5:17:00 AM

Hey Stan...it sounds like a good song! :D