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"I need you" flitted through his mind. He longed to croon her name, as he had done so many times back when she felt the same. "I want you"--whispered to her back-- she surely didn't hear. If she awoke would she respond? Would she want him so near? "I love you," said aloud to her, did not invade her dreams. She failed to move into his arms. She didn't hear, it seems. She mourned her loss of love for him through passing of the years. Pretending sleep, she rested on her pillow wet with tears. June 18, 2018, entered in Teppo Gren's Evergreen Contest # 4-- Cilla Black Songs February 2, 2019, entered in Mark Toney's Poetry Marathon, Mile 15 December 2016, placed 3rd in Rob Carmack's Screwed Contest Placed 1st in the Love Not Returned Contest, March 2017 Placed 2nd in Brian Strand's Contest 212, September, 2016

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Date: 1/28/2019 5:06:00 AM
beautiful poem
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/28/2019 6:56:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mahtab. Janice
Date: 8/29/2017 9:01:00 AM
Congrats Janice, for your WIN with this fine piece!! ;-)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/29/2017 9:28:00 AM
Thank you so much, Teddy! Janice
Date: 8/21/2017 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations Janice ! :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/21/2017 7:38:00 AM
Thanks so much, Heidi! Janice
Date: 3/28/2017 2:26:00 PM
How very sadly well done, congratulations Janice...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/28/2017 3:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, Charlie! Janice
Date: 3/28/2017 8:39:00 AM
Congrats Janice, for your well-deserved first placement with this literary jewel!! ;-)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/28/2017 1:38:00 PM
Thank you so much, Teddy! Janice
Date: 3/27/2017 3:55:00 AM
Beautifully done Janice. Congrats on your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/27/2017 2:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Phil! Janice
Date: 3/26/2017 7:50:00 PM
Congrats; may others never, ever miss the healing of forgiveness and love. enjoyed the "story," though saddened. Anil Deo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/27/2017 2:12:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anil! Janice
Date: 12/29/2016 5:32:00 PM
What a sad, beautiful poem. Congrats on your win, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/29/2016 7:40:00 PM
Thanks so much, Agnes! Janice
Date: 12/24/2016 2:01:00 PM
SAd one on a couple that has grown apart. Or was never even together from the beginning. REally good stuff. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/24/2016 2:29:00 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Merry Christmas! Janice
Date: 12/22/2016 8:38:00 PM
That fourth stanza surprised me, gave me jolt. Congrats and thanks for supporting my contest.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 12/22/2016 9:04:00 PM
Rob, THANK YOU for sponsoring the contest and for placing my poem high! Obviously, I'm very pleased. Janice
Date: 9/29/2016 8:46:00 PM
Well done Janice, congratulations...
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/29/2016 9:02:00 PM
Thanks so much, Charlie! Janice
Date: 9/29/2016 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations, Janice! ...Fran
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/29/2016 1:52:00 PM
Thank you so much, Fran! Janice
Date: 9/28/2016 6:36:00 PM
so original and thought provoking...big congrats Janice :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/28/2016 9:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, David. Janice
Date: 9/28/2016 6:06:00 AM
beautiful sweet Janice...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/28/2016 9:10:00 PM
Thanks so much, Luloo. Janice
Date: 9/28/2016 5:30:00 AM
Congrats on your win Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/28/2016 9:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Joseph. Janice
Date: 9/14/2015 1:07:00 PM
Janice, congrats on your wonderful win. SKAT love :)
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/28/2016 9:13:00 PM
Skat, I obviously overlooked this comment a whole year ago! Janice
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/28/2016 9:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, SKAT. Janice
Date: 9/14/2015 4:26:00 AM
Such an emotive beauty Janice! Congrats on yet another win my friend!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/14/2015 8:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Upma! Congratulations to YOU. "River" is very moving in its concise description of hurt and hopelessness. Janice

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