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The Void

My body an empty hollow vessel Your words of love are meant for me To fill my soul against its doubt Still the void within rages Sometimes love is not enough I struggle for fulfilling sustenance My heart beats in empty hollow rhythms Hoping your love as true will lift me up But still the void within rages Sometimes love is not enough Some days my soul's anguish vilipend I hold your love cradled To ease my empty hollow despair But still the void within rages Sometimes love is not enough

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Date: 9/16/2019 1:20:00 PM
CONGRATS n Blessing
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Date: 9/15/2019 12:07:00 AM
Beautifully written. Congratulations and blessings
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Date: 9/14/2019 11:51:00 AM
Deep emotive write Jeanne... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 9/12/2019 7:16:00 AM
"Hoping your love as true will lift me up But still the void within rages" - so appropriate; so heartfelt. So wonderful fro this contest, Jeanne.
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Date: 9/10/2019 1:01:00 PM
I love that last stanza, especially; beautifully done.
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Date: 9/10/2019 11:53:00 AM
one can feel the echo of the hollow heart and soul in this one...it lingers through the depths of your words...excellent write for the contest :) hugs
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 9/10/2019 12:18:00 PM
Thank you Sandra. I remember those pang when I was younger before learning my love for me was enough.
Date: 9/10/2019 11:37:00 AM
How artistically penned!))) PR
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 9/10/2019 12:17:00 PM
Gracias!
Date: 9/10/2019 11:25:00 AM
Wow, that was really cool Jeanne. This should do well in the contest. Best wishes my friend
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Jeanne McGee
Date: 9/10/2019 12:17:00 PM
Thanks for coming by Chris. and for the encouragement!