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The Very Same Tree

Racism is what really annoys me For we were all in the very same tree When we came down to the ground We just spread around And that's how there is you and there's me

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Lee Ramage

Date: 8/4/2011 11:03:00 PM

Excellent poem. Racism is something that should be obsolete. Lovely quill. Lee

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/4/2011 2:02:00 PM

We share this intolerance for racism, James. Indeed, we are all part of mankind's family tree. Powerful limerick and congratulations on your win. Love, Carolyn

Jack Horne

Date: 8/4/2011 11:59:00 AM

Wow, so many contest results again! Many congrats for all your wins : )

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 8/3/2011 10:29:00 PM

heheh cute poem James and congrats on the win.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/3/2011 11:28:00 AM

the king rules...a rousing applause to you for the shining win! ..:) huggs!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/3/2011 7:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Natalie's contest James. Love, Carol

James Peranteau

Date: 8/3/2011 6:38:00 AM

I've been searching dear poet for a way to describe my feelings on this subject, and here you have scribed it so well, you've quenched my desire to do so ! Well done my friend ! Have a fantastic week sir....much love, james