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The Velvet Noose

I am a broken-winged dove Held in a soft, black bag Tied round with a velvet noose. Reasoning with my sensibilities He seeks to assure me All will be well If I simply stop struggling And allow him to feed me Soft, warm food From his caring hand. I am a rudderless vessel Adrift on a river Filled with sharpened rocks of worry Holding the anchor, He fastens it calmly ‘Round the mainmast Of my shredded sail And speaks quietly Of landlocked shipyards And safe harbors. I am a voiceless singer Reading silent music Written with pens of invisible ink. Softly approaching He closes the door On my singing heart And tears the score Of unheard symphonies: The music is gone; It exists no more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/17/2010 1:50:00 AM
Sad, but beautiful poetry Deb, so understandable that it won in the recent contest >> James :)
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Date: 12/10/2010 10:57:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry here at PoetrySoup this year Deb. May you and yours have a wonderful Holiday Season and may the New Year bring you and yours good health, and may your hearts be overflowing with love and happiness. Love and blessings always, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 9:20:00 PM
Deb, this is one of my favorites I have read in this contest. REALLY nice. Congratulations. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/6/2010 12:59:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your big win in John's contest with this brilliant write and entry .. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem with luv..
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Date: 12/6/2010 11:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's "Jaded Partitions" contest Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 5:49:00 AM
Good one..I am glad that I chose it to read this morn..Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:53:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Jared, deb
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Date: 11/30/2010 11:50:00 AM
It has a strong tension. Each word seems to be carefully chosen.
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Date: 11/30/2010 11:26:00 AM
Deb, you might consider entering this moving poem in John Heck's "Jaded Partitions" contest. Striking contradictions with the "voiceless singer...silent music...invisible ink." You make the reader feel this woman's helplessness. Excellent writing! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 11/29/2010 12:04:00 PM
This is wonderful.
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