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The Unlucky One

The UN lucky one Puts on her make up Wear a dress she bough today Leave a list is on the table Baby sitter’s on her way Unknown faces around her She learns to pretend Same familiar hotel But with different men’ And she remembered When her life use to be fun But unlike the movie She was not the lucky one She though she found love But his heart was cold as stone Cause nine months later She was in a ward alone With nowhere to go And a new life to care for She found a number And knock on a door Her parents disown her With a baby in her hands And this is how Her dark side began And she is my friend Will never disrespect Will never judge her God made no one perfect And she is a good girl With beautiful long hair She has compassion And she shows it everywhere She helps a lady cross the street Give a homeless a dollar Buys him something to eat And he said god bless her And she is not proud Of the life she live And what we don’t understand We have to learn to forgive And those with no sins Can cast the first stone And if we can’t throw it Let’s just leave her alone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/24/2012 11:37:00 PM
Beauty of a write here,Kasim...The truthfulness in all of it is so great...Nice job!
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Date: 6/24/2012 10:06:00 PM
You are so gifted Kas. Well one
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/24/2012 10:07:00 PM
Oops should read well done.
Date: 6/24/2012 5:06:00 PM
Kasim, i think you are on the right track... lol..love your ending...... thanks for sharing your poem, always~PD
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Kasim Ishmael
Date: 6/24/2012 6:01:00 PM
thank you my friend
Date: 6/24/2012 6:58:00 AM
You tell 'um Kasim! Well done and I like your message very much.
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Kasim Ishmael
Date: 6/24/2012 7:20:00 AM
thank you friend
Date: 6/24/2012 6:22:00 AM
No, she was not the lucky one...no one is perfeckt....so true. - Well written poem Kasim. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Kasim Ishmael
Date: 6/24/2012 7:22:00 AM
anne lise thank you ,i like to write about subjects that on one will write about and that is the real facts of life ,and my poems don,t always have a happy ending,because life don,t always have one

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