The Ultimate Ego Trip

It said by the sage
that without intelligent observers
the universe would crystallise
into hard matter and cold energy
ruled by soulless mathematics.

It takes humble apes to breath life into our cosmos.

Would there be heat if we didn't feel warmth from our sun?
Would there be light If we didn't bathe in a camp fire's illumination?
Would there be colour if we weren't inspired by its hues and shades
to create great works of art on caves or on canvas?
Would time exist without life between birth and death
nudging the gears of the cosmic timepiece?

Are we the conclusion of billions of years
of random interactions leading to our existence?
The ultimate coincidence?
Or did we come first and force our universe
to create history all the way back to creation
as foundations of reality
so we humble observers can observe?

As we look back in time at the points of fossil light hurtling away from us,
how many of these have played a role in our distant past?

And which of these so long ago
sparked chains of cause and effect
that prompted me to write this verse
and prompted you to read it?

The ultimate ego trip.
From our window on the universe.
Our night sky.


Written 14th April 2017
Entry to "stargazing" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Haight Avatar
April 20, 2017 at 5:03 PM
Great questions, Mark...very thought-provoking. Congratulations on your Podium Third Place win! 7 Sandra
Martin Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 10:08 AM
Thanks Sandra! :-)
Krampe Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 9:24 PM
Congrats on your win, Mark.
Martin Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 10:08 AM
Thanks Agnes! :-)
Wolf Avatar
April 18, 2017 at 8:06 PM
A well-deserved win in my contest! Congrats
Martin Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 10:04 AM
Thanks White Wolf for the placement and for running this interesting contest! All the best! Mark :-)
Parker Avatar
April 14, 2017 at 10:15 AM
thoughts that had a purpose, well done, asked in a manner where answers to your questions come easily while reading....good luck in the contest..my own thought is we are just here to supply the plants with carbon dioxide
Martin Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 6:41 AM
Thanks Frederic for your feedback. Personally I think human civilisation and technology exists simply to serve domestic cats, our true masters, or so they seem to think! Quite an interesting contest topic! :-)
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