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The Tumbling Tombly

then on the tombly tumbling down ripples of tummely tim go little fishes talkering with a tailywaggy swim the tombly wimbles windely through wilds of woolied weed taking in the wailitudes wondrously sceneried when open mouthed o mouthelly a monster moorbed in teeth of boats and manied musilings of the fishes underneath the tombly teems a tricklely from tanglelessy start and captures all the talleyness with tumbling tombly heart

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Date: 4/1/2025 2:38:00 PM
Hello Clive, Wow! Your poem is an absolute delight! I love the playful rhythm and whimsical language you’ve created. It feels like a joyful adventure through a fantastical world. The way you describe the "tombly tumbling" and the charming little fishes is so imaginative. It’s a wonderful escape that sparks the imagination and invites laughter. It truly brightens the day! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 4/1/2025 2:46:00 PM
Thanks for your kind and generous words Daniel
Date: 4/1/2025 8:57:00 AM
You really could be the next Seuss if you put your mind to it
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 4/1/2025 2:45:00 PM
I'm trying. Thanks for reading Tom

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