The Tree

Sprawled across the track
it lay like some stranded whale,
the dead tree,
centuries old, finally fallen.

No more summer breeze or winter winds,
Just so much wood to be dismembered,
gross, dead, silent and rotten.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 6:25 PM
Yes, this one touched me...Enjoyed..Congrats..Sara
Poet Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Very nicely potrayed picture of the falling tree here.Congrats Barbara on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 11:35 AM
Congrats Barbara on your first place win with these brilliant beauty words luv...enjoy..
Brown Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 9:57 AM
Good morning and congratulations on your 1st Place win in Brian's "Verse" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 5:50 AM
PROFOUND IMAGES EVOKING MUCH THOUGHT AND EMOTIONS IN THE READERS MIND. CONGRATULATIONS! ON YOUR WELL DESERVED WIN, BARBARA. LOVE, LAINIE
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October 15, 2009 at 12:48 PM
Barbara, congratulations on having your poem selected as one of the winner in the Poetry Soup contest. Way to go! Enjoy your honor. Karen
Fraser Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 11:31 AM
Many congratulations in this 2009 contest, well done >> James
Brown Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 4:03 AM
Congratulations on your win in the June,2009 contest sponsored by PoetrySoup Barbara. Love,Carol
Fish Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 10:28 PM
Congratulations on your poem. Great work and well deserved. Catch you up the trail ~<><
Pate Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 8:16 PM
Barbara congratulations on placing in the finals! Gives a new meaning to the phrase "how the mighty have fallen."
Sheart Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 7:38 PM
Barbara, Congratulations on your poem winning in the finals!! So happy for you. Love Light Truth Patricia
Moreno Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 11:49 AM
Barbara, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
Sheart Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 8:46 AM
Hi Barbara Wow! Awesome Pastoral. You understand the woodland forest so well. I honor that. Thanks for your comments and your invite to read this. I'm sooooo glad I did! Look forward to reading more of your lovely poetry hun. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia Oh, you know I think you would really like "The Blossom Tree" I wrote it some time agao but....smile.Congrats making semi-finals!!!
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September 25, 2009 at 1:58 PM
Interesting perspective. Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
Gorelick Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 12:16 PM
Good work, congrats on making it through...BG
Fraser Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 11:49 AM
Barbara, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition, good luck with your lovely poem >> James
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 10:07 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 7:41 PM
Barbara, congrats on your feature this week...Raul
Augustus Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 2:54 PM
Congratulations on getting your poem featured!
Mason Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 10:29 AM
Awesome write here, Barbara. Some Native Americans call Trees, Standing People ... and like them we will all have our demise as your last line in this wonderful write suggests ... smile ... excellent selection to be a feature this week at PoetrySoup! Congratulations!
Fraser Avatar
September 22, 2009 at 6:24 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Barbara, nice write>>James
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September 21, 2009 at 4:41 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem! Laura :)
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September 21, 2009 at 12:21 PM
congrats on your poem being feagtured this week, it is moving.
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September 21, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Congrats on your poetry being featured this week… please keep writing… great you Barbara! Adeleke
Brown Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 3:15 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Barbara. Love, Carol
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