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The time between seasons are pauses, life's twists and turns the causes; the seasons are steps forward, and I must be heading nor'ward. The journey and map erratic, sometimes the season is dramatic; and sometimes charismatic, but of course- there are days pragmatic. As Fall leaves float- my mind will drift, walking a cemetery path the wind is swift; my tears falling and my head . . . I lift, grief and sadness I must send adrift. I am a child of winter- a child of cold, and I keep words frozen and untold; the end of life is just a threshold, but . . . to this world I tightly hold. Memories . . . reappear and change, the pauses and season rearrange; my life's journey has been- strange, where good and bad always interchange. The time between seasons are pauses, life's twists and turns the causes; the seasons are steps forward, and I must be heading nor'ward. ___________________ July 09, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/The Time Between The Seasons Copyright Protected, ID 07-1472-559-09 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, The Time Between The Seasons sponsor, Kim Rodrigues, Judged 08/01/2022 Second Place

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Date: 8/3/2022 2:31:00 PM
Beautiful, Constance. I love ~ memories reappear and change, the pauses and seasons rearrange. So true. Congrats on your sin!
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Date: 8/3/2022 2:34:00 PM
Ann, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congrats, blessings ~Constance
Date: 8/2/2022 8:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write/story. Have a great/blessed day.......................
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Date: 8/2/2022 3:46:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 8/1/2022 10:29:00 PM
Congratulations, Constance for your podium placement.
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Date: 8/2/2022 3:46:00 PM
Subimal, thank you so much for the congratulations, blessings ~Constance
Date: 8/1/2022 9:14:00 AM
Constance, congratulations on your win! I think you perfectly articulated the time between the seasons with your "pauses!" Blessings to you in all of the seasons.
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Date: 8/1/2022 1:06:00 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and comment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 8/1/2022 2:33:00 AM
Quite a unique rhyme pattern ~ congrats on your win, Constance, beautifully composed, as always
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Date: 8/1/2022 1:07:00 PM
Seeker, thank you so much for the compliment and the congrats, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/31/2022 10:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your second placement Constance. Beautiful as always. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 8/1/2022 1:07:00 PM
Connie, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/31/2022 6:45:00 PM
A lovely write, Constance! The third verse reveals the somber mood. Congratulations on 2nd place trophy!
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Date: 8/1/2022 1:08:00 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the inspiration, the contest and my placement and for the compliment, comment and congratulations, appreciate, blessings ~Constance
Date: 7/10/2022 11:16:00 PM
Love your theme Constance, for life has its challenging moments. You have expressed them perfectly in this wonderful submission. God bless you... and thank you for sharing...
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Date: 7/11/2022 9:02:00 AM
Michael, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings ~Constance

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