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The Testaments Behold, the essence of aubergine and a trail of sparkles yields the moment to radiant reds, like a breasted robin of autumns abandon legions in crumpled layers, impaled to moisten saffron petals and chartreuse fronds, Strewn against a capricious path that points to a dusty field in white, ebbing the tides of a wintry breath, facing an arched hall of a supreme grandiose silken veiled sky, It distributes elegance and beauty and cast it hither for its righteous placing, neath the surge of an ocher spread of sunflowers, that escort its mentored Sun, Offering to surf a periwinkle wave, with broad sets of sprawls entertaining a receptive ivory sea of crested puffiness, wooing anointing doves to joyously immerse creation toward its pure dawning rise of scriptures souls. 2019 September 11 *1st Place* Fall Into Fall ~~Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 9/24/2019 9:52:00 PM
I love the array of colors that burst into my mind with your wonderful descriptions. Beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your win!!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/24/2019 10:05:00 PM
With my extended courtesies of appreciation ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/24/2019 10:28:00 AM
William, congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem!
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Date: 9/24/2019 10:32:00 AM
Thanks, whole-heartedly indeed ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/23/2019 1:06:00 PM
A nice tribute to fall. Congrats William on your first place win.
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Date: 9/23/2019 1:27:00 PM
Thank you ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/23/2019 1:21:00 AM
Hey congrats on your win!;)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 9/23/2019 1:24:00 AM
Thank you ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/23/2019 12:07:00 AM
This is quite beautiful... Many congratulations and blessings
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Date: 9/23/2019 12:49:00 AM
Amen, blessings to you ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/22/2019 11:43:00 PM
WONDERFUL BIG CONGRATS TO WIN TOP. Blessing always.
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Date: 9/23/2019 12:48:00 AM
I am appreciative ~ Aloha always William
Date: 9/22/2019 6:22:00 PM
Wow this is magnificent William! This beauty is going straight into my Faves! Your poetry makes my heart sing in operatic notes that reverberate in such divine vibrations that it connects me with heavenly realms. I am happy to see it honored in First Place and happy I didn't miss out on reading it. Congratulations my friend! : ) xxoo
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Date: 9/22/2019 6:36:00 PM
Count on you for the immensity of FAVE's--SING ON--Mahalo nui loa, ~ Aloha always William

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