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From the mist of time comes a tear and I trace it's path creeping . . . It was in deep autumn of a long past year when stained glass leaves were red and bleeding and at your cold grave I stood, a girl, weeping ___________________ June 12, 2022 Poetry/English Quintain/the tear Copyright Protected, ID 06-1464-174-12 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere Choice sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 06/12/2022 Eighth Place

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/13/2022 9:57:00 AM

CONGRATS on your win with this touching poem, Constance. Janice

Constance La France
Date: 6/13/2022 2:49:00 PM

Janice, thank you so much for the congrats and the compliment, blessings ~Constance

Elaine George

Date: 6/13/2022 4:25:00 AM

So deep and so emotional. Touched my heart and soul, dear Constance. This one goes to my fav list. Congratulations on your win.

Constance La France
Date: 6/13/2022 7:56:00 AM

Elaine, thank you so much for your comment, compassion, congratulations and FAV, appreciate, blessings ~Constance

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/12/2022 10:54:00 AM

Hello Constance, i can vision you weeping. Friendship & Love, Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/13/2022 10:28:00 AM

Hello Constance, you are welcome. Love & Friendship Darlene

Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2022 1:21:00 PM

Darlene, thank you so much for the visit and comment, blessings ~Constance

L Milton Hankins

Date: 6/12/2022 10:08:00 AM

Such a beautiful, meaningful verse, Constance. It's simply lovely in its simplicity and poignancy. Superb job!

Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2022 1:21:00 PM

Milt, thank you for the compliment ~Constance

Sally Eslinger

Date: 6/12/2022 9:01:00 AM

Constance, I feel this touching scene as a lovely moving painting having story and atmosphere. With all of the both contained in a tear. Marvelous poem!

Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2022 1:22:00 PM

Sally, thank you so much for the wonderful comment and for the compliment, blessings ~Constance

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 6/12/2022 8:41:00 AM

Wow, very poignant and heartfelt ~ a tribute to love and loss. Good luck in the contest! :)Paulette

Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2022 1:23:00 PM

Paulette, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings ~Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/12/2022 7:50:00 AM

We always remember and the remembrance is on a foundation of love.

Constance La France
Date: 6/12/2022 8:03:00 AM

Kim, thank you so much for the visit and comment, grief comes when we least expect it, love and blessings ~Constance