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The Super Moon Eclipse

The Super Moon cries as she peeks! Illuminating earthly deeds! Wars, and poverty are seen! She eclipses, to cover eyes to see! 9/28/2015

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Edlynn Nau

Date: 11/11/2015 12:32:00 PM

Really fun personification of the moon. Like the paradox of moons beauty & earth's ugly deeds. Images crystal clear! Nice one (7)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/15/2015 11:35:00 PM

It is a very good piece!!! I want to apologize again for your poem not showing up in the contest. I should have remembered, because I e-mailed you to congratulate you on Poem Of the Day! One of the effects of my short term memory and it truly is bad.

Michael Tor
Date: 10/18/2015 10:45:00 PM

Eve thank you Dear. Your very kind Eve and I appreciate your kindness. God bless you.

Joan Donnelly Ellis

Date: 10/9/2015 1:23:00 AM

Remarkable piece of work

Michael Tor
Date: 10/9/2015 9:54:00 PM

Thank you Joan.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 10/4/2015 8:46:00 AM

Very exceptional and inspiring my friend, short sweet, a wonderful entry for the contest I'll be crossing my fingers for you, but I don't think with this piece that your have much to worry about because of the imagery that this poem reflects in someones imagination. Well you have a great weekend and thanks for all your visits to my site, glad you enjoyed to endure, cheri

Michael Tor
Date: 10/4/2015 9:28:00 PM

Thank you Dear Cheri. I have been very busy we had a neighborhood party at our house. I made Buffalo style wins and pizza. We had a wonderful time. Telling stories, enjoying the Eagles, Don Henley, Bob Seger music among others. Cheri thank you for your encouragement. I respect my fellow Judges but I would prefer 5 or ten judges appose to one. I think more feedback is better. The reason I say this is because beauty is in the eye of the beholder. One beholder might like a poem another might not. So if you have the consensus of more poets I think it would be better for everyone. Just a thought. I trust most my fellow Poets and I respect their decisions whether I like them or not. They take the time to read and judge and put forth tremendous effort. I admire people that take their personal time to sponsor these wonderful contest. We have many talented woman and men here that makes up a family of talents each contributing a piece of themselves, much appreciated by all of us.

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 10/3/2015 4:29:00 PM

wow this is beyond great. I love the connection and relation to humanity. 7+++

Michael Tor
Date: 10/3/2015 10:05:00 PM

Thank you njeri. How are you? Thanks for your kind remarks. Your words brighten my day. I shared them with my wife. She said your very sweet. I have to go over and take a look at one of your gems.

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/2/2015 6:29:00 AM

Great depth and beauty in this fine poem my friend. Fine choice for POTD. A7

Michael Tor
Date: 10/2/2015 8:45:00 PM

Thank you Robert. I appreciate your generous thoughts.

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/2/2015 6:28:00 AM

Great depth and beauty in this fine poem my friend. Fine choice for POTD. A7

Emile Pinet

Date: 10/1/2015 6:47:00 PM

You describe your feelings and dramatically make us feel how they effect you. Emile.

Michael Tor
Date: 10/1/2015 7:00:00 PM

Clever observation Emile. You are correct my friend. Thanks for visiting have to make my way over to see your latest works.

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/1/2015 5:37:00 PM

Hi Michael, a belated congrats to you for your outstanding 'super moon eclipse' poem featured as POTD! Very clever and wise! Sandra

Michael Tor
Date: 10/1/2015 7:05:00 PM

Hi Sandra thank you for your visit. Much appreciated. Thank for your acknowledgement.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/1/2015 1:55:00 PM

Congratulations on achieving POTD. Sorry I am a day late in congratulating you.

Michael Tor
Date: 10/1/2015 2:57:00 PM

Hey Richard I'm just happy you stopped by. I appreciate your kind remarks. Hope you are doing well. I've been busy raking all these falling leaves that keep on coming lol. Love Autumn but the season makes you work lol.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/1/2015 12:19:00 PM

This clever quatrain, beautiful and mesmerizing, is deserving to be Poem of the Day! Congratulations, my friend and a 7!

Michael Tor
Date: 10/1/2015 1:32:00 PM

Hi Pandita hope you are well. Thank you for your kind comments!

Adri Dew

Date: 10/1/2015 1:50:00 AM

Beautifully written... Loved it

Adri Dew
Date: 10/1/2015 10:01:00 AM

ha ha... no really .. I loved your style of writing

Michael Tor
Date: 10/1/2015 2:18:00 AM

Thank you Dew I have to get over and read some of yours.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/30/2015 10:19:00 PM

Congratulations, on your wonderful poem of the day. LINDA

Michael Tor
Date: 10/1/2015 12:56:00 AM

Thank you Linda for your kind words.

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/30/2015 9:28:00 PM

Even the moon is enraged by the images she sees! Succint and loaded write, Michael. Congrats on your POTD! Kim :-)

Michael Tor
Date: 10/1/2015 12:57:00 AM

Thanks Kim. For your observations.

James Inman

Date: 9/30/2015 8:50:00 PM

Great write Michael.

Michael Tor
Date: 10/1/2015 12:58:00 AM

Thank you James.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/30/2015 6:12:00 PM

A lovely message Michael congrats on poem of the day and good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7

Michael Tor
Date: 9/30/2015 8:21:00 PM

Thanks a lot Jan for your encouraging comments. Hugs back...

Tim Smith

Date: 9/30/2015 5:51:00 PM

Congrats Michael...Jack did a Tributick for you and POTD ...wow

Michael Tor
Date: 9/30/2015 5:56:00 PM

Thank you Tim I didn't know. I just got home.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/30/2015 4:32:00 PM

An excellent quatrain, Michael, in which your personified moon gives us much food for thought. Congrats on POTD. // paul

Michael Tor
Date: 9/30/2015 6:00:00 PM

Thank you Paul. Your observation and kind comments are dearly appreciated.

David Meade

Date: 9/30/2015 1:02:00 PM

Awesome Eve, loved it much!

Michael Tor
Date: 9/30/2015 4:00:00 PM

Thank you David Eve sponsored the contest.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/30/2015 10:20:00 AM

Lovely poem full of deep feelings, dear. Congrats on having this poem selected as POTD. HUGS

Michael Tor
Date: 9/30/2015 4:02:00 PM

Hugs back to you Lovely Eileen thank you for your kind words.

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/30/2015 9:46:00 AM

So truthful and watchful is your wary eye,that you even notice the moon get sickened by our childish tantrums.Excellent choice for POTD.Congrats michael.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/30/2015 4:04:00 PM

Miraj thank you my friend, for your keen observation and understanding. Exactly the effect I wanted to convey.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/30/2015 8:09:00 AM

- Back to say: CONGRATULATIONS !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor
Date: 9/30/2015 4:05:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise for taking the time again. Your thoughts are appreciated.

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/30/2015 6:39:00 AM

Congrats on being selected as Poem Of The Day :)

Michael Tor
Date: 9/30/2015 4:10:00 PM

George again, thank you for taking the time to send your kind words of encouragement. Your words always please me and for me they always command attention.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/30/2015 4:07:00 PM

Casarah thank you so much for your kind words.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/30/2015 5:12:00 AM

Very philosophical, excellently written with volumes of hidden messages! A seven, my friend, Michael!

Michael Tor
Date: 9/30/2015 4:19:00 PM

Demetrios your heart is warmer then your words my friend!

Mark Woods

Date: 9/30/2015 4:28:00 AM

Congrats on POTD, a fine achievement sir.

Michael Tor
Date: 9/30/2015 4:22:00 PM

Mark thank you so much. Your kind words mean a lot to me. God bless you.